|Reviews for In Relation to Magic|
| IronSpockMaster chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
I love this. I love the way you wrote Narcissa, and the bit about Draco not being used to hugs. I think... I think it works as a drabble, just a moment that shows insight into Draco's character.
| haters make-me famous chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Aw I loved it!
| AlexisJayde chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
It's cute. _
I have to say though, having all the words bolded and underlined was a little distracting.
You should write more HP, Snow.
| Ella Not Lotte chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
It's a bit short and choppy. It would be better if it were longer.
I liked the plot-ling, though. It's sad, reading Narcissa like that, but it's how she may have reacted to the end of the war. I always enjoy the little snapshots of the moment after Voldemort is taken down. The bold-faced/underlined thing, though, was annoying. Was that an accident?
Keep up the good work and try and make it a bit longer next time.
| Lovers.Love.Liars.Lie chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
One piece of advise I would give you is maybe not putting the whole thing in bold and underlined as it kind of detracts away from the actual story and is distracting.
I'm not used to reading Narcissa/Draco stories and this one I quite like. It was sweet and nice. You rarely read a fic where they have a loving relationship.
Very sweet, Snow.