Very enjoyable read! This definitely has that Silver Age flair to it, the way the action was described I was actually envisioning the battle panel by panel. Liked how the trip was funded by Jonah as well, decent plot device that's been used "once or twice" before. Got Spidey a trip to Paris in Issue #143! Would love to read some more stories like this.

I actually quite liked this. I would have liked it more if you described it in better detail. I also recommend putting all chapters into one and titling it as a 'one-shot.'

Anyway, good job. A nice short read.