|Reviews for The New Life of John|
| agent pheonix chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
it is good
| The Son of Satan chapter 12 . 10/28/2015
I like it its very nice no Interesting and a little but funny.
| Hooptdo chapter 12 . 10/21/2015
So...love the story, really great twist compared to Halo 4...personally, the twist was better, but that's just me. Only one problem...updates. Yes, they must happen. This was too good to just let go. Please, and yes, I said please update as soon as possible. But aside from that, keep the writing up.
| Cell-01 chapter 9 . 7/30/2015
HE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL! HE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL!
| typhoon chaos chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
It's just a piece of dust. That's all. I'm not crying.
Okay. Maybe I AM crying.
| Jessamin chapter 12 . 4/17/2015
wha noooo please update. Aside from the R rated scenes the book is pretty good, what is gonna happen next
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/8/2015
Dude, it's been two years since you last updated this fantastic story, please come!
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/11/2015
u better write more or i'll beat u to death with own skull.[ pulls out knife]
| i chapter 12 . 1/17/2015
You got hit by the rockets and got killed I see.
| LOLCAT254 chapter 12 . 12/1/2014
Where is the next chapter? Its killing me waiting!
| LOLCAT254 chapter 8 . 12/1/2014
I keep on thinking the picture is a puppy, but then I realize its master cheif
| LOLCAT254 chapter 7 . 11/30/2014
This is for the second paragraph, that's what she said ;-)
| LOLCAT254 chapter 4 . 11/30/2014
Luna is the moon right?
| Tahkaullus01 chapter 6 . 11/19/2014
Um...you do know that Master Chief Petty Officer of the Navy is a higher rank than Chief Petty Officer right?
| cameron.akana chapter 12 . 9/9/2014