Reviews for The New Life of John
StarclanSpecops chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Off the deck (hahaha) I get it
Dimechridon3 chapter 2 . 8/8/2016
great read great work
Deadpool The Merc With A Mouth chapter 11 . 7/29/2016
Did he grab her ass?
hayden taggart chapter 12 . 5/2/2016
hey General Spartan ninja you need more chapters
Nirvash77 chapter 12 . 3/10/2016
This story is just too perfect. And unlike others, I can wait for your updates. It makes the chapters worth it.
Starsense chapter 12 . 2/8/2016
I love the story. It has a lot of room to grow and could be a full fledged novel. I will even donate to you if it means you will continue writing this! Are you just waiting until the end of the halo franchise to find out what happens to the two of them?
agent pheonix chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
it is good
The Son of Satan chapter 12 . 10/28/2015
I like it its very nice no Interesting and a little but funny.
Hooptdo chapter 12 . 10/21/2015
So...love the story, really great twist compared to Halo 4...personally, the twist was better, but that's just me. Only one problem...updates. Yes, they must happen. This was too good to just let go. Please, and yes, I said please update as soon as possible. But aside from that, keep the writing up.
Cell-01 chapter 9 . 7/30/2015
HE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL! HE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL!
typhoon chaos chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
It's just a piece of dust. That's all. I'm not crying.

Okay. Maybe I AM crying.
Jessamin chapter 12 . 4/17/2015
wha noooo please update. Aside from the R rated scenes the book is pretty good, what is gonna happen next
Guest chapter 12 . 3/8/2015
Dude, it's been two years since you last updated this fantastic story, please come!
Guest chapter 12 . 2/11/2015
u better write more or i'll beat u to death with own skull.[ pulls out knife]
i chapter 12 . 1/17/2015
You got hit by the rockets and got killed I see.
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