Reviews for Secret Window
Bellephont17 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
Wow - awesome idea! I wouldn't write this story for the world, however, because I'd be afraid a dairy farmer in a puritanical felt hat would show up at my doorstep :X
i-am-walrus chapter 2 . 4/3/2010
This was really good! Although, I think the opening was about how he would was "burry her in the deep corner where...yada yada yada" not about how he'd kill her there. Sorry if I'm wrong or if that was intended, and it's not that big a thing, just something I noticed and I'm really just nitpicking now.

But in all the story was really good. The story you created that followed what Mort when through yet the slight changes where well thought out, and they way you wrote Todd's inner voice and even the dialogue was engaging and interesting to read. It's tone was scarily similar to the tone set in the first couple of lines given to us in the movie which is a big accomplishment seeing as we were given so little.

All in all, well done! I’m sure Mort would be proud ;)