Reviews for Missing Luck
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Well done
Tripleguess chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Neat expansion on a secondary though important character. I love extrapolations like this, based in minutely observed details in the original. Well done!
LuckyLadybug chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Intriguing. I like the backstory you gave for Charon! The way you wove the prompt throughout was really well-done. And I love the descriptions of when Fakir came to live there and how Charon was overwhelmed by dealing with a kid at first. The line about coming to consider Mytho his own was really sweet. And the explanation you gave for how Charon came into possession of the sword was an excellent touch. I was wondering why he had that and how.

I really like his thought process in the last section and how Princess Tutu clears his mind. Returning to the prompt one last time was a good way to end the piece.