Reviews for The birth of loyalty
sparkle chapter 5 . 2/11/2014
you should make the chapters more longer and add more brawles in however it is a realy exciting and interesting and you made the caractors sound like how they would speak in the movie and in the cartoons realy good it was nice reading it cant stop reading it lol
BloodyWolf83 chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
That was a awesome story I really really enjoyed and loved it please continue please that would be very nice
Guest chapter 5 . 9/29/2012
Gus Grav3 chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
Primo Vulcan is spelled as Premo Vulcan
Nice story :3 The battle scene isnt really that bad, but you should kinda speed up the posting.
assassin-emily chapter 5 . 7/5/2010
ooooo! lovin it! cant wait for next chappy!
Micuko chapter 5 . 5/17/2010
woh, Spectra is awesome! XD great chapter, I was so happy to see this updated.

Hmm. I wonder what will happen next. XD loved it.
Cardog 24 chapter 5 . 5/16/2010
I'll help you rewrite this. But after I update my own Bakugan-fic.
Micuko chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
this was so interesing! 3 I loved it. I hope to read more soon.
xXxoxXx chapter 3 . 3/30/2010
Wow, this story isn't that bad. I'm a Vexos fan, and I thought this was pretty good.

The only errors I saw were in your punctuation. You forgot to punctuate in your quotations. But it only happened a few times, so don't worry.

I thought this story would have been more popular, since there are so little stories revolving around the Vexos. Weird...

Also, they're kind of OOC. Shadow is usually (how can I say this nicely...) really crazy and wacky, and he laughs too much.

Lync is portrayed as an untrustworthy weasel that cares only about himself. Also, he's Prince Hydron's spy.

Anyway, great job. I like this fic :D Keep up the good work
VeekaIzhanez chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
like this fic.