Reviews for The Curse of Love
Death and Rebirth chapter 6 . 11/23/2010
vinh chapter 6 . 2/7/2007
lovely revision.
Elen-Di chapter 6 . 6/27/2006
Red-Rose18 chapter 6 . 8/18/2005
great chapter I kinda feel bad for Kaelin but I wanted S&D to get together. is this the end or is there more?
serenitatis417 chapter 6 . 8/13/2005
YAY! this story is soo brilliant and soo sweet! hehehe, poor kaelin...

wow! hope u write more stories!


LF aqua.r
Luckyladybird chapter 6 . 8/13/2005
I rely like this chapter it has so much going on and i love the bit when they were saying what he liked and what he was allergic to loved it soo funny please update soon
whoknoez chapter 6 . 8/13/2005
Whoo! Wow. That was awesome. Kaelin is such a brat. I'm glad Darien came to his senses. It was a wonderful story. )
EmpressAuthor chapter 6 . 8/13/2005
I liked the story, but it was missing some depth and it felt like you rushed it in order to get chapters out for your readers. If you're going to rewrite and expnd on a story, take some time to have fun with it. Give Darien and Serena more challenges to go through before they get back together-extend the vaction, have them deal with each other as rulers and try to ignore each other. Give kaelin more of a personality and presence or there's really no point in having her there. She just takes up space and serves as someone Darien used to convinve himself that he didn't love Serena anymore. Have her fight to keep him.

Again, the story was still a good read, but ti could use some tuning. Good luck in your future endeavors.
Toki Hasegara chapter 6 . 8/13/2005
The ending was so beautiful! Great story!
ser chapter 5 . 6/23/2005
i really like this story so pls see if u can update or finish it in the next chapter
Elen chapter 5 . 6/11/2005
Toki Hasegara chapter 5 . 3/12/2005
I can't wait to see what they are plotting!
nauti-pandachan chapter 5 . 3/8/2005
goodness ur story made me cry for serena

i really enjoyed it

update soon

can't wait )
serenitylovegod chapter 5 . 3/7/2005
I love your story. The second version is so good. can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work
hotohori's empress chapter 5 . 3/6/2005
wow... let's how Darien's going to get out of this mess... please update soon
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