|Reviews for Fan Fiction|
| StarzXAndXMoon chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
This was actually really touching, and it just hit right home! I shouldn't care whether or not I'll get any reviews for my stories (although that would be nice), it should be more about why I'm writing it and I should also be having fun when I'm writing. It just seems like people are forgetting all about that. It was the reason why FanFiction was created in the first place.
Other than that, it did manage to get a few laughs from me, but it was the message that you were trying to portray that spoke to me more.
| XarluLunete chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
This story is absolute truth: That all the awesome (or whatever) authors on FF rely on reviews. It makes us happy when people read the stories, or favorite it or put us on alert, but we get absolutely happy when someone reviews! I thought that it was hilarious that Demyx was making a story that's not even a story, but kept on going when people were like, OMFG, you idiot, STOP! I just 3 this story.
| ChottoMatte chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
:O You made me feel the need to review...
I liked it XD
| Zchocolatebunniesrulezworld chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Well, I don't know about 'deep message', but you certainly described everything that is *horrible* about FFNet. Sure, Marly was basically writing porn, but it was well-written porn and he put so much effort into it, while Demyx just slaps down whatever the hell comes into his head...and Demmy gets more reviews? This is why I don't flame, because I don't think most people look at stories' reviews-they just see that a horrible piece of writing got over 500 reviews, and they die a little inside...
:D I haven't commented on the story, have I? Ranting is *fun* ;)
I like your clever little AU-but-not setting; how they're all hired as actors for the games, XD And hahaha, poor Vexy...I think the only reason *anyone* likes MarVex is because of ladychimera on DeviantArt-at least, that's the only reason *I* do. So poking fun at them is fine by me, ;D
Larxene here is Made of Win :3 Plus, the entire Orgy in a drunken stupor in a nightclub is an image I won't be forgetting any time soon...luvvit!
| ladyaicilef chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
Wow, I guess it was deep at the end :P Good work sister.
You know those silent laughs? Those ones when you make no sound but ur acually laughing so hard you cant breath..? Yeah that happened to me when I read Demyx's title "Um, Hey" . Omg...so simple yet genious.. XDXD
Awesome work ! :D
| A.D. Williams chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
It's currently six in the morning and I'm still up, xD! So, do forgive my lack of eloquence with this review.
Marluxia's thoughts about his awesome story not getting any reviews I know has had to cross the mind of basically every really awesome writer out there. He also mentioned something that I think ticks all of us off: stories that people do everything to, but review. I'm happy to be fave'd, to be your favorite author, that you alerted my story to know when I update and all of that...but nobody ELSE sees that! xD! When others have seen reviews for a story, especially a lot, they become more interested in it and then want to read it for themselves! I honestly felt this way with my most popular story, Laments of a Lawliet. It's only 25 chapters long, but I very strangely managed to get nearly 600 reviews...that's not a brag either, I'm still amazed at that, xD!
Anywho! I do love that Demyx's story wasn't a real story, and that despite all the hate comments, he kept on truckin'. At least his 'story' idea did make sense, speak of himself, if not a fiction at all. Badly written fiction though...those are the ones I'll usually leave to others to say something about and just kindly keep quiet, lol! I think what Marly needs to do for his story is something I myself had once done; he needs to join the Review Revolution (not my term) and when he reviews, kindly slip in for the person to check out his work. Don't plead, for that's very unbecoming (he himself said that he didn't like bickering about the lack of reviews), but just kind of put it out there that you'd be appreciative. People will usually return the goodwill of you having reviewed them by them reviewing you...as I am doing to you, AcceberRider, _ I'm awake (although I need to hit the sack after this, lol!), and had nothing else to do and this story looked to be a good one...and I was right!
I'm rambling here...but this topic just...gods, it touched me! Because when you're really passionate about your fanficts, you don't focus on the fact that you own next to nothing that you're writing about; it's you, and the characters, and your plot idea and you just...get so into it! And you want it to be appreciated! Gah, stop Amanda! You'll be here all day babbling about this!
Oh...you didn't mention everyone in the Org, but I'm SO happy you said the house had 14 people. It always makes me smile when people remember that Xion does (did) exist. _ The current quotes from her on my profile pay homage to her.
Okay...I'ma stop now so that you don't spend your entire day having to read this, lol! In short, thank you for such an awesome story plot, thoroughly enjoyed it!
| Your-Gothic-Angel chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
aw that was kinda sweet! 3
I loved demyx in this story. He was so uber-duber cute!
this My be my Zemyx fan girl in me but I think that the one who gave the super supportive reveiw was Zexion.
I loved this story. Keep writing!
| Objection 3 chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
I lurked around DA and found this.
You write way too good ;w;
The Demyx thing made me smile 3
Ima just keep lurking you.
And read all your fics.
| Valentine chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
OMG OMG OMG, GOT'A MESELF A FRACKEN NOSE BLEED...well, not...but it was so awesome...XD
| kitari66 chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Aww it was very cute! I'm happy!