are you going to be updateing again or is i tdone? if done, mark so, if not, UPDATE SOON!

awww cute C:

Great story!

plz write more!

thats really good

bloody cliffhangers i hate them and i love this story and i hope you update soon

i really like this one

OMG Loved it please update soon x

i love it!

i love it!

please please update i love it i want the next chapter so please update.

love the story continue on cant wait for it any longer

ok i'm reviewing now:) mebbe some ppl wanna review but they cant? chill! anyways, 3 ur story!

XOXOXOXO

anyway pls make more!

i lovee it it's awesomee i wass cryig

I like your story too and review whenever I want. But, at the moment you start saying 'I'm not happy with just one thing (story alert OR favourite story) but I want everything (story alert AND favourite story)' that doesn't sound good to us and people will likely NOT review because you start demanding it. You've got 28 review. Why aren't you happy?

And, you don't update very often yourself. This dismotivates many people to read your story. Only reason I haven't deleted your story, is because I like the way your write. I don't like when you get demanding like posting this 'very important' note. I don't find it important. I waisted a minute of my life reading that.

You are only 14 and I really find your writing and fantasy amazing. But, please, stop staying that someone must review. Would you like that if someone kept forcing you?

Another thing. When you don't update often enough (I would say once in 2/3 weeks) people forget what had happened in the previous chapter, because it was a month ago when they read the last chapter and several month when they read the chapter before that.

I hope you understand that being like this is a big no for a writer.