Reviews for A Good concussion
IAmTheDoormouse chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I am sad to say that I did not enjoy this fanfiction. Your writing style is fine but it is not consistent to that of the novels and not at par with Markus Zusak's style. I did not feel that Ed was in character, as well as the other characters. On a happier note I very much so liked the comment on Sophie being Millas age but still having the same legs as she had when she was 15. I also liked Milla saying, "you can break yourself out, Ed, I don't need to." I felt that this was very consistent with the style of the novel. Best of luck in future projects.
CrazyCousinEiko chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Haha! I loved the part with Milla and Sophie assaulting the Rose boys old lady style! XD I also loved how Milla told Ed to wake himself up. :P Ed was in character, and this dream was far more entertaining than any he had in the books. Good job. ;)