I loved this story and i hope there will be more

good

some one put this on YouTube but they got rid of it i've missed it

Shut the fuck up Kevin Daniels you fucking faggot.

Sadly Sakura was a totally waste, she showed a lot of potential as character development since she is a main character, specially after the timeskip but Kishimoto decided to let her just the girl who griefs about Sasuke's betrayal alongside with Naruto.

too any oc for me boss. good luck but not my cup of tea.

to the guest ahole who reviewed before me, are you paying the aurhor to write? you are a degenerate. malicious asses like you don't belong on this app. if you dont like story or the way an author wrote a story, just say why and stop reading. no one is forcing you to read. wishing death on a person? for what, not writing a fanfiction, that they get nothing from, according to your wishes? do better.

Your "author's notes" in the middle of the story show everyone what a complete worthless fucktard you are. Quit writing, or better yet, quit breathing you worthless piece of shit.

hiding behind a guest account so the author can't pm you to improve is cowardly and disrespectful

oh by the way anonymous guest if you want your opinion to matter make a damn account before insulting another story you are like Sasuke, you are below scum

nice story reaper7 from one writer to another you have guts to write despite the haters

man I mean come on can't some people just write to have fun I know I do have people like you haters up my butt annoying me so damn much it's not even criticism anymore you are just insulting the writer

yo I'm a writer myself guest that decided to flame this writers story if you don't like his style read something else or don't read stories at all because your type of attitude irritates me god damn your kind puts even critics at a bad name so stfu and leave the poor writer alone

What is with all the stupid underlining? Between those and your incessant need to put in your dumb as fuck Authors Notes in the middle of the chapter, you have made this damn near unreadable. Learn how to write and try again. Or don't write again. Whatever actually works.

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