|Reviews for Fifty Words|
| TEAM AYUMI chapter 12 . 2/9/2011
I would like to see a chibi Heiji and Conan team up... But I would LOVE A CHIBI KAZUCHAN FANFIC AND I WOULD JUST PICK HER UP AND HUG HER SSSSOOOOO KKKKAAAAAWWWWWWIIIIII!_
All right lets see a chibi Kazuha in action and protecting Heiji while he's portecting! Sougi!
I would imange what little Kazuchan would like too keep her identy down. She would have her hair down with a hairband(like Ayumichan's twin only with long) or her side bangs tied into braids or barrette holding back her side hair.
Anyways a chibi Kazuha would be a whole lot cuter then a chibi Heiji. Although I would like Heiji's heavy, high pitched and childish Osakan accsent, I bet it would sound very !
SO I VOTE FOR CHIBI KAZUCHAN!_
| Procrastinating Penguin chapter 11 . 4/7/2010
You're right. Toichi is way too underrated in the fandom. XD
| Procrastinating Penguin chapter 8 . 4/4/2010
What? You don't like this chapter? I like it! There's not many Eri fics out there. I think your Eri was very IC ;D, I wrote something similiar a while ago but it was dodgy so I never got around to posting it. (It was Ginzo/Eri, though XD)
So very Kogoro and Eri to ignore each other... honestly, I can't wait for them to get back together already! It's so obvious they still like each other. *eye roll*
Anyways, I like this chapter. Please keep up the good work. :D
| Procrastinating Penguin chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Haha I guess with Kaito, ther are so many things you'd rather not know. XD
| LeonaWriter chapter 5 . 4/1/2010
Heh, I especially like this one. It's got real potencial. Imagine how many things would've gone differently if Takagi (who MIGHT've listened to Shinichi) had been there right at the beginning. Interesting.
| HetaPastaH3ro chapter 4 . 3/31/2010
Is Kaito DRUNK?
| roankun chapter 3 . 3/31/2010
3rd chap's not bad. not bad at all. (i didnt read the first two :P)
although, you might want to use some spacing. say, two sentences for each paragraph. i dunno why, but for me, it just flows better that way.
| Onomatopoeiafloon chapter 3 . 3/30/2010
Way to dwell into Haibara's character with such a short amount of words. This was done very well. :3 We actually had to write essay's like this for College Bound English, they're tougher to think of than most people would think. XP
Anyways, very cute. I hate how people assume that Haibara is completely cold, in and out, when she clearly isn't. She cares for those kids very much I think, and it's nice to see other people notice her soft and warm interior. :3
| Onomatopoeiafloon chapter 2 . 3/29/2010
I love Shinichi so much. :P It would suck to be trying to explain to people something like that and not even realize you'd been turned into a teeny-tiny cute detective twerp. :3
Lawl, and then his fans call him a twerp. XP Anyways, really cute. It's hard writing little things like that. Harder than most people would think. Very cute. :3