|Reviews for First Blood|
| Pie chapter 28 . 4/1/2014
WHY U NO UPDATE? *cries*
lol I never thought that Byakuya and Apporo were cousin...
but LOVE the idea VERY MUCH
ohh...if possible can do too that both of them having a conversation but szay would be present as well? wait is he even aware? hahaha xD
| Khorale chapter 28 . 7/16/2012
Did Aporro still have that blindspot...?
| Selena Estella chapter 28 . 10/5/2011
LOL. I love this fic. It's funny, sarcastic, deep, emotional, perverted (don't deny it) and sadistic in just the right amounts. Please update soon!
| OedonWrithe chapter 12 . 9/26/2011
LMFAO. Orihime... The omake... XD XD XD
| OedonWrithe chapter 28 . 9/26/2011
Szayel's such a sneaky bastard. Love that. And I agree with Aporro on Lumina and Verona's cuteness... No wrong word... Er - A... It starts with a vowel... ENDEARING! Their endearing traits.
Gosh I wish I could send you the original copies of my fan art... But that would be questionable, because then I'd have to know your address so I could mail it to you (unless you conveniently live in the Finger Lakes region, specifically Canandaigua Lake), and then you'd end up knowing mine via return address and it'd be one big internet safety nightmare... DX
I think you need to update this... Just one chapter... Aporro is feeling neglected... All alone...
| OedonWrithe chapter 2 . 6/9/2011
Ya know, I'm going to draw Szayel, Aporro, and Vicenta. I just gotta. When I'm done I'll upload it onto my DeviantART profile (my extremely un-used dA profile) Which I have a link to on my profile. Trust me, I'm better at drawing then I was when I drew the stuff on there now... (Heck, maybe I'll throw in a KITTY!Grimmjow snuggling up to Vicenta.)
I really can't express how much I love your stories. Specially this great book duo... :P
So... Vicenta... black hair, yellow-ish eyes... Aporro... Szayel but shorter with more girlish features and boobs (Bigger than Orihime O.o just wow)... 'Kay, correct me if I'm wrong on anything, please.
I do things on paper with Sakura (TM) Pigma Sensei pens and Crayola Colored Pencils (some CrazyArt, too, they're kinda mixed together in my pencil box) and rarely do anything digitally.
So... I'm wonderfully glad that there is a sequel (same theme I thought of but different antagonist. I was thinking Arturo Plateado xD) and I love the omakes. :D
| OedonWrithe chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
OH MY GOD THERE IS A SEQUEL!
God, I LOVE you, Rayna.
This is great... I love how Szayel just took out a needle and sedated her and no one reacted. That was beautiful.
Actually... The mapping thing is a great idea. leave it to Vicenta to think of that awesomeness.
| Rochelle13 chapter 28 . 6/1/2011
I love this story and can't wait till you update it. _
| bleedinginternally chapter 28 . 3/13/2011
When r u gonna update? 。・・(ノД)・・。
| thatredheadedchick chapter 28 . 7/15/2010
I just wanted you to know that I absolutely LOVE this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry! 3
| Xylexia chapter 28 . 7/10/2010
Nooooo update update update! *cries*
I wonder what Aporro's release is? It must be hella dangerous if Szayel is trying to keep such control of it!
| Xylexia chapter 26 . 7/10/2010
Oh no...she's going to have a little!
But...isn't the birth cycle for an arrancar supposed to be like a month? And she's been kidnapped for what a week? and they/it haven't had a growth spurt yet? Hmm lol
| Xylexia chapter 24 . 7/10/2010
Poor Szayel always having to be the emotionally strong one of the two. I'm sure he'd like nothing more than to break down like he did when Aporro passed away for the first time *huggles Szay*
| Xylexia chapter 20 . 7/10/2010
Wow. Of all the fics I read I end up forgetting what Szayel's true personality is. I love soft, funny, slightly sadistic/vane Szayel. That's the image I gathered from him as I watched the anime (never read the manga) so in the end I always end up forgetting just who and what he is (although, I may be wrong when I say you slight exaggerate his sadism, maybe? nah probably not, he's a scientist after all). That little torture session in his laboratory actually made me clasp my hands over my face and squirm in my seat it was that disturbing (though very well written). Typically I wouldn't think he'd go that far to sate his sadistic tendencies, though understandably, he was doing it for his daughters sake...but he did enjoy it...*shudders*
Really just a shock overall, my usually fluffy image of szayel crumbling before my eyes lol
| Xylexia chapter 18 . 7/10/2010
That has to be the best short scene with Grimmjow and catnip EVER
On a different note, poor Aporro, going absolutely ballistic on Szayel in order to get her daughter, I feel for her :(
And then has to go and say THOSE words...'You're mine. I decide when you die.'