|Reviews for Twelve Years Later|
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/28/2012
It's been over a year! Please continue!
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/6/2012
I wonder how old is she
| CosmosChaos chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
Mistake Checker! :D
Other than the confusing sentence, it was really good :)
One word: SUSPENSE! :D
| CosmosChaos chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
Her grumbyness towards remind me of people i know :P *swats* XD
Its looking really good, Blu
Continuing on into the adventure of your story
| CosmosChaos chapter 2 . 5/28/2012
Lol love the spicy twist to their little fight :D
and of course, their "making up"
Next please! :D
| CosmosChaos chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Love the sarcastic gestures and dialog, made me laugh a little :)
Heading to the second chapter, its that addicting :D
Keep it up, Blu
| SongtotheMoon17 chapter 17 . 10/15/2011
Omg I love this! Very well thought out plot! I can't wait to see what happens, and I really want to know why Scarlet was sick a few chapters ago. Although I think I already know; just confirm my suspisions. And I love how Mrs. White is the one who has all the kids yet she doesn't really seem like a very motherly figure. It's great! Update soon!
Lots of Love!
| MissBrownClue13 chapter 8 . 6/14/2011
Hi Clarinetgirl2427, I must say I am really enjoying this and I'm so glad you've updated it! I love the interaction between the former Miss Scarlet and Professor Plum, their dialogue works so well and I can truly believe that they are a married couple. It's true that any parent would want to protect their child and the way you have crafted the characters is exactly right for the story. Well done on another fantastic chapter!
| MissBrownClue13 chapter 7 . 9/6/2010
Another brilliant chapter! It's so good and the tension is mounting!
| MissBrownClue13 chapter 3 . 4/8/2010
What can I say? I love the pace of this, and I can't wait to hear what happens next. One tiny thing- conversion (if you mean conversation is spelt with an 'at' in between the s and i. I love the way you;ve kept everyone in character, I can't wait to see how Wadsworth deals with them all.
| MissBrownClue13 chapter 2 . 4/5/2010
Another suspense-filled chapter, I love the little sidelines you have added about the other characters, as I said before, this story has great potential, and thank you for taking the time to post it.
| MissBrownClue13 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
This is a brilliant beginning, I love the sinister aspect of it, and I'm glad you used Wadsworth as a protagonist/antagonist just as he is in the film. I'd love to know what happens next, please don't abandon this, it has great potential.
Also, since you obviously like Clue the movie, could you please check out my two Clue stories.