Reviews for Torn Asunder
Katydid43 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Really nice usage of the word of the week! So sad... and poignant. It just makes you want to wrap your arms around them and give them a big old hug, huh?
Micaiah chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Nice job. I can see it playing out this way.
RealFunkyTown chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Absolutely marvelous job capturing the Winchesters here. This so John and Dean and so fully shows how devastating Sam's departure was for them.
Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
"fought tooth and nail" - nice use of WOW Jen

Edina
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
Nice use of the word and so very Dean. Perfectly captures that moment we never saw..
Swellison chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Oh, poor Dean. This is one scene that I really, really wish we had a definitive canon version of (hey, they can do a flashback, right?) because it's pivotal in the Winchester Universe. I never tire of reading the fan versions, tho.

Nice way of skirting the dialogue and concentrating on the feelings, too. I can understand why Dean needed a drink or twelve after that.

Sue
Miyo86 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Painful, in the good way :( Oh Dean...and John...no better way to drown the pain then a couple shots. Wonderful if depressing mood set here!
Carol chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Great job capturing the moment. Very in character for both John and Dean. Well done!
masondixon chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
I can see this scene very clearly in my head. Thank You.
DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
That's so melancholy... makes me sad. well observed hunny. Bev x