|Reviews for And Then There Were Ten More|
| glassangelrose chapter 10 . 6/21/2011
still good but i was a little confused over what happened in the middle of this chapter with eva and carson. . .
| glassangelrose chapter 8 . 6/21/2011
Sooo good, can't stop reading it :D! There r a few typos, and maybe u could add a bit more description in a few places but overall excellent and very suspensful! Update soon :)
| Ohemmgeeit'sAlex chapter 8 . 6/17/2011
Oh my god, my mom found my fanfiction. 0.o XD WHY?
| Ohemmgeeit'sAlex chapter 10 . 6/17/2011
I really think you have a great talent and I hope you continue to write when you get older. I have an idea who the killer could be, but I'll wait awhile before I post my guess. Agatha Christie is totally awesome and I think you do her proud here!
| I.C.2014 chapter 3 . 6/13/2011
That guy didn't know how right he was
| Ohemmgeeit'sAlex chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Well thank you so much! I'm really sorry I haven't been updating. I'm the world's worst procrastinator, and I used school as an excuse. xD But now it's summer, and I'm feeling ambitious, so I'll try to get a new chapter out by the end of this week. Thanks so much for reviewing!
| PC chapter 9 . 6/12/2011
Well, this has been an amazing story so far. Please continue! I know it's been like 7 months, but I'm really hoping you'll resume this awesome story.
Right now, I'm trying to figure out who's the murderer. To find that out, I'll try to pair up your characters to their ATTWN counterparts. Morse- obviously not Owen, and he is Marston. Ben Edwards- he represents Mrs. Rogers. On that note, Abigail is Mr Rogers, so not Wargrave.
Originally, I thought it'd be Nathanial- because he has that sort of professional job like Wargrave, plus he seems to be all chummy with the doctor, like Wargrave was. However, the death he caused seems like legit murder, whereas in ATTWN, Wargrave, the killer, was the only one whose non-island accusation was not real murder. So, I thought it'd be the person who could have previously been innocent. I decided the person who most likely was not truly responsible would be Samantha- maybe the "lies" about the congressman were true. However, it was weird that she was suspected so much, and plus, she died. I doubt you'd pull a Wargrave this early on- though who knows? That'd be super clever of you. However, with the nature of her death, and all the people who see it, I find that unlikely.
Now, earlier, I mentioned the doctor. I'm almost positive he represents Armstrong, which means innocent. However, who knows? Just because they share the same profession doesn't mean they have to be parallels. So for me, he's unlikely.
Those are really the only ones out of suspicion for me. I mentioned earlier about how in ATTWN, the murderer was the one who was paradoxically innocent of the other "crime." For most of these, it seems like from flashbacks that they were guilty. The only one we haven't had a flashback of is Ryan, so maybe his story wasn't true? However, I think he's Lombard, to Vanessa's Vera. That's more a hunch, though. Rita seems like a possible Emily to me, because of the inciting of suicide. However, she doesn't seem too annoyingly self righteous, so dunno about that. So really, it's between Eva and Nathanial for who's Wargrave and who's Blore- and I can say that I have no idea! I mean, who knows? Besides you, obviously. One of my hunches that cleared someone earlier could be wrong, and it could be them. Right now, I just hope you update soon, or at least if you don't feel like writing the whole thing out, maybe you'll just post who you planned it to be. However, please update it! I know I'm not the only AC fan who loves this type of fanfic, and who'd love more!
| SydneeeyGrant chapter 9 . 10/10/2010
This is ! Please continue!
| Bookbanchee chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
I read this book this past year at school! I loved it! You're doing an awesome job!
| Mateo Diego chapter 5 . 6/17/2010
I think you're definitely on the right track. You're a good writer, and the structure of your writing is all there. The only thing I'm struggling with is really getting pulled in. Ms. Christie perfected the art of subtly teasing us and leaving us wanting more. I'm just having a hard time getting interested in any of the characters, because they haven't gotten chances yet to really define themselves or make them unique.
I just finished reading ATTWN for probably the twenty-somethingth time, hahaha, and she is SOOO good at defining her characters so quickly. But they're still unique and interesting.
so overall, I'd say work on some hooks. Don't rely on the major plot points (the record, the murders) to pull us in. We know that's gonna happen. Instead, try starting and ending your chapters with some character development or narrations that leave us with unanswered questions. :]
Sorry if that was too much! I tend to ramble. Hahahah. I'm working on my own ATTWN fan fic right now too, so I know how hard it is! Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more!
| insane-silentium chapter 4 . 5/24/2010
It's getting good. I wonder what their crimes are.
| insane-silentium chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
So far so good. This seems like it could be a good fic and I can't wait to see what happens.
| Jane Poirot chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Hmm, this looks interesting...different from the Ten Little Somethings spin-offs on here (I am not one to talk; I've got my own Ten Little Somethings original fic that I haven't updated in months). I look forward to more...