Reviews for The Wedding
EAMC1992 chapter 1 . 1/24
who the hell is the groom and who is the best man
kitkat3051 chapter 20 . 10/13/2014
loved it!
Lafemmevegeta chapter 20 . 8/29/2014
Great story! I enjoyed it and loved these two were not perfect. Abortion is tough to talk about but you handled it great. Wonderful writing!
Glam.mam chapter 20 . 8/10/2014
Awsum loved this fic, never hated a bella before then grew to love her amazballs xxx
armpedsrn chapter 8 . 7/27/2014
I really am hating Bella right now.
tammy0208 chapter 7 . 7/26/2014
I think this is the first story where I have absolutely hated Bella. She's freaking delusional, someone needs to have her vomited. I feel so sorry for Edward, sea a bitch. Hopefully he wises up and dumps her ass
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 20 . 5/2/2014
Baby fever is in full bloom. Twins are always great! Surprise babies are fun too. This surprise baby was conceived in a fully committed loving situation too. So that was great.

I'm curious about the last baby though. You mention that Bella enjoyed the pregnancy and that the baby was a serene happy little soul right from the start. But the sex and name isn't reveled. Rose and Alice getting pregnant again was mentioned as well as the sex and names of their babies. But not the sex and name of Edward a Bella's baby. They needed a boy to even their numbers out. But I like the idea of another little princess.

I'm glad they figured things out and made peace. It took them a while (a loooong while) to figure things out and get it right. But they finally did and seemed to be quite happy. That's good.
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 19 . 5/2/2014
That's a lot of baby fever going around. Weddings too.

I love the surprise vow renewal. They needed it. Besides the fact that their memories were hazy and they got married for the wrong reason they needed a real wedding with real vows and feelings involved. Loved it! I love the new rings too. All of that was perfect.

Another thing I loved ... Afton transferring. Bella may trust Edward but there's no sense in putting temptation in front of him when he seems to have a certain way of coping with stress. I'm glad she seemed to quietly leave the scene though.
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
I don't understand his logic that he 'sort of' dated Afton and that they were only good friends. Last I checked good friends don't discuss marriage and buy condoms in anticipation of sex. Good friends don't fantasize about sex and introduce them to your child AND wife. Plus he went put with her at least twice a week for weeks if not months. Sounds like a lot more than good friends to me.

Speaking of wife, I found it hilarious and oh so hypocritical that Edward was offended that Jacob would kiss Bella in front of her *husband*. Did he forget that he had his *wife* watch his daughter so he could go on dates? That he introduced his *wife* to the woman he was *dating* while married?

His shock over Alice assuming he slept with Afton and whining "why does everyone assume I slept with her." Had me rolling my eyes. Uh, hello, you dated the woman and obviously felt it was serious enough to introduce her to your daughter AND move into a new place so your wife wouldn't have to watch you bringing her home with you. Seemed like a safe assumption to me. Frustrating clueless man.

I feel bad for the baby. In her short life she's already moved multiple times. She moved into her nursery in the shared apartment and then into Bella's room once the started separating. Then they moved to the new apartments so Edward could have booty calls moving the baby between apartments. Now moving her officially into the new apartment they will share. All while seeing daddy's new girlfriend and feeling the tension of stress surrounding everyone. It's a wonder she didn't throw some major fits since babies pick up on stress.

I'm glad they finally figured themselves out. Bella was right, if they couldn't figure out how to cope without falling back into the habit of looking for a substitution then there was no hope for them.
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 17 . 5/2/2014
Grrr silly frustrating man. At least he didn't sleep with her.
Lady Moon Shadows chapter 16 . 5/2/2014
What?! I can not believe that Edward started dating someone else. When he asked Bella for permission I really thought that was him trying to give her a jolt of jealousy so she would fight for theme wasn't expecting at all that he was ready to start dating. AND bring her around the baby AND buy condoms AND discuss marriage with her. That completely threw me for a loop and majorly disappointed me in him.

Funny how he was more than happy to move on and have Bella watch him bring Afton around their daughter but he certainly wasn't happy at the thought of her moving on. Typical.
gatorgrl91 chapter 20 . 1/20/2014
gatorgrl91 chapter 19 . 1/20/2014
Love it!
gatorgrl91 chapter 17 . 1/20/2014
Where can I go to find the Awesome but Unappreciated list? That sounds like an awesome list! :)

Awesome read so far! I'm too addicted to stop and review so my apologies!
gatorgrl91 chapter 14 . 1/20/2014
So good! Heart fail and heart warming! :)
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