Reviews for Girls just want to have fun
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Awesome keep on writing more
Jason chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
First off; Ignore that prick roli, he obviously has no idea what he is talking about.

Second; This was very well written overall, however I would agree with the other comments that it is too short. It was obvious it was not meant to be a fully developed plot, and rather an excellent short story, but in general a longer build up is required to really tie it together well. I found your C.C. was described brilliantly, and I wish you well for any future writing you do.
Bubbybubz-chan chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
that was great, please write more.
Ghost2113 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Pretty good but was too short
rii96 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
NICE ONE! I liked it!
roli chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
fuck you dude it fucking suck pip sucks motherfudker