|Reviews for Renegade|
| Ravelon chapter 6 . 3/31/2013
At first the story was a little boring. But then there was Kane. And he was AWESOME! Best Kane depiction EVER after Kucan himself. And the blending of those two universes is almost perfect. Keep going!
| someone.took.my.name chapter 12 . 3/6/2013
O god your story, is orgasmic. Basicly the only Massefect storie I've read worth the 3 days of reading in spare time, Eagles fall and Verge war has already been read, And this story has spawned 5 more like eagles fall at the moment.
This story eventhough it takes long to write has a certain charm to it almost adictingly so.
I cant wait for the next chapter.
You have done what no-other author has done that I have seen.
1ste seamlessly incorperate 2 storie genres into one.
2nd started an avalaunce of fictions inside your fiction, inside a fiction.
3rd Made this story so damn good.
| Bronzedamazon chapter 12 . 1/29/2013
Beautifully written, you choice of words truly paint a clear picture of what is happening. It was very easy to get into this story. I look forward to another entry.
I also like the codex entries a the bottom, it helps me when trying to visualize everything!
| AhumbleHalofan chapter 9 . 1/24/2013
I just got a chill down my spine when I read the last part of this. I hope you use that great sense of imagination you have and give the scrin some serious teeth. The force that attacked earth was only a security force to start with. NOT military. I want to see what the real Scrin army can do.
| Ibskib chapter 7 . 1/23/2013
This chapter was surprisingly humorous, which is really the best kind, looking forward to more Garrus Shenanigans.
| AhumbleHalofan chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
My only question is where's Tali? Or is it a guy Tali?
| AhumbleHalofan chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
...I can't believe you ACTUALLY pulled this Crossover. You actually made it good not just good but great! I hope to continue to read such great stories!
| Moloch chapter 12 . 1/12/2013
Enjoyable as always, great work! XD
I liked the snarky comments in the scrin communications as well, nice touch
Keep it up!
| shadowassassin2 chapter 12 . 1/12/2013
Holy shit this fic is amazing I love how you do the action and the suspense it had me so focused on the story and I love your shepherd she is just a badass character the thing with kael was just funny I love it I can't wait to see what u do with the tension that is going to spring up with kanes return from the dead you made it seem like shepherd might be asked to switch sides I can't wait.
Ps all shall follow the messiah
| Yoholic chapter 12 . 12/30/2012
Wicked chapter, cant believe how strong the scrin are.
| DirtNap chapter 12 . 12/21/2012
AHHHHH I've come to the end of yet another of your amazing stories! I eagerly await the next chapter. If you have a thread over on SB let me know I'll follow you like I follow Gregg
| guardian1165 chapter 12 . 12/12/2012
Does TIM have the leftovers of the prothean scientists stuck in his head from interacting eith the citadel?
| Dunesaber chapter 12 . 12/2/2012
I found my self skipping the story and chapters to read the Codexs first, I really like them and so fare I'm also liking the story, GDI and NOD Mass Effect GENIUS.
Now heading back to chapter 3 to contine reading looking forward to more updates.
| Crash Overdrive chapter 12 . 12/2/2012
The series so far is quite well written, and I have spotted only a few grammatical errors. Also, I liked the little Firefly reference you put in.
| gster391 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
One quick question, did you set the Brotherhood of Nod to be like the Brotherhood of Steel? Or is that actually what they use in C&C?