Reviews for Renegade |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... I do admit I kind of hope Shepard will later get equipped with most likely-superior NOD augmentations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good story so far, never really played command and conquer so I don't have much reference knowledge for that end of things. But the writing was done well enough that I still got sucked in and enjoyed myself. |
![]() ![]() Nice story friend really like it, however Shepard is starting to sound like a tratior. Down with kane, long live GDI |
![]() ![]() ![]() im not too enthused about the combat stuff, but whatever this tacticus is, its clearly important |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice dresden files reference, it seems like the norse gods have gone galactic with monoc securitys |
![]() ![]() ![]() for those of us not in the know, what exactly are the scrin anyway? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ive only played bits of command and conquer, but if this is as good as your other mass effect crossovers then its bound to be another great read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this. It seems like this one is abandoned (?), but it's very good and interesting even compared to your other newer stories. It's full of cool references, intense action, suspense and intriguing spy-games. I really hope that you decide to continue this at some point. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just when I thought Garrus couldn't get any more awesome, you make this. How do you do it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reichenfaust - Hey, man, there's something you should know. It may just blow your mind. Rail guns and Mass drivers? They're the same damn thing. Does that blow your mind? Well, it shouldn't, but you're apparently too damn lazy to actually research what the terms actually mean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rail guns would be a major factor in space, and GDI mastered them as part of the Mammoth tank, and the medium tank for their armies. The Ion Cannon would be devastating mid range, but rail guns are more powerful long range, especially at the established weights the Mass Effect ships use. Rail guns propel their slugs faster, and have greater range. Their is no way that they would not be on their ships. Especially because they could just laugh at the Mass driver tech when they have railguns. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is an exquisite blending of two very different lores. It's smart, has great character and characters and is full of juicy details. I love it, I want more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You deserve more views. Another fan fiction writer recommend reading your story. He's is called Paragon Reinterpretations. thought you might be interested. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love how you portray the combat scenes. I hope you come back to this story at some point because I would love to see it finished. |
![]() ![]() You ever going to post the actual update? i saw the snippet on sb from like three and a half weeks ago and figured you would have the chapter up some time ago. Whats wrong? you have not died or anything i hope? this is a very good story and i hope you post the next chapter soon. |