Reviews for But a walking shadow
MusicalNinja15 chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Awww... very bittersweet. That was beautiful...
Stars May Fall chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Yeah my OTP for the Hunger Games. I loved this couple, they were the only reason I got through Mocking Jay ( I kept hoping for more scenes with them).

I liked how you outlined how Annie changed without making her a screaming maniac that some people make her, I always saw her as stronger than that. And I could not see Finnick as loving someone who always screams. Imagine the lack in his beauty sleep.

The last line is what hit me the hardest, somehow it showed his love and despair. Good choice of words.

Hope you write for them again.
fiendishly chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Crying.
Omega135 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
This is extremely well-written albeit depressing. I am a huge fan of all of your Percy Jackson fics, and this one is a nice change as well. Keep writing, I love your work :)
yay chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
This is beautiful. The last three lines are amazing.
Lauren chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
:'( *sniffle*
snazzyflower chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
O.o
And this is the start of my new-found obsession of Finnick Odair and Annie Cresta.
THANK YOU! AHH! MUST GO FIND MORE FINNICK AND ANNIE STORIES!
binnenpretje chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Sad, simple and cute. poor finnick.
kaminoko-x chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Aaaaggghh! The angst! That was beautifully well written.

Love the last lines in particular.
erasmuse chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
This is just great! You say so much with so little.
Marshmallow Gurl chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Powerful, and sad. Great work :)
WonderinWonderland chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
aww so sad!
the unbirthday girl chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Wow. This is wonderful. I love it. I absolutely love it.

And the…the… I am lost for words. This is amazing.
the unbirthday girl chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Wow. This is wonderful. I love it. I absolutely love it.

And the…the… I am lost for words. This is amazing.
Seinakyou chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Wow.

This is really, really powerful, and it captures a part of Finnick... and Annie, too, that is often overlooked.

It feels really raw. It's pretty fantastic.

Well done. I love the last two sentences. They just feel so amazing.

(I love it 3)

Seina
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