Reviews for New Father
chalicity chapter 1 . 12/2/2017
Absolutely perfect short story - the movement through the scenes and the suspense build up was so well done. Even dealing with such a chilling subject, everyone was perfectly in character. I felt both horrified of and sympathetic to Vlad - which is not an easy balance. Excellent story.
TheSoulOfAStrawberry chapter 1 . 7/8/2017
i read this pretty late at night and it Messed Me Up man. so creepy! i like that the true outcome wasn't revealed until the absolute end, so the story builds really nicely :0 thank you for writing this!
Blitza chapter 1 . 6/19/2017
Will this be continued in anyway? Or is it a one shot?
android727 chapter 1 . 6/4/2017
wowowow wow. that was terrifying and believable and insane but still in character. thank you.
YouCanOnlyPretend chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Oh my god. This needs a sequel.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
do a sequel plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!
EctoAdler chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
oh and can we please get a sequel?
EctoAdler chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
oh mh god Vlad haa finally lost it. i must say this was REALLY ingenious
neeniya chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
That was crazy. This /is/ crazy. Holy cow Vlad, you're seriously messed up!

Very good fic. I liked Vlad's monologue there, very villain-esque
Darkeyes7 chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
This is fabulous. Both the writing and idea. I really want to ask for another chapter, but I guess this is just a oneshot left open for your readers to fill in. Good job.
acrisafu chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Oh my god this fantastic and uderly sad. Poor Danny ):
Absolute amazing though!
G chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
Updated please!
JennaUtena chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
I know it's been years since you wrote this but this is so creepy and so brilliant that it DESERVES to be more than a one-shot! Unfortunately, it's perfect currently! This is so great and so vexing...AAAGGHHH!
Misaki Takahashi Akihiko chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
So damn scary in a good way.
RedRose206 chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
You are really good at shocking me speechless and then leaving me with unanswered questions, only this time I can't seem to put them into words, or even make sense of them in my head.
Again, great work, and I can't wait to read more!
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