|Reviews for Shadowfire: The Metallics|
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 18 . 10/31/2013
Damnable bikini! Argh! I will never be free of the mental images of that outfit, and darn you for not only that BUT another mature scene! Why do I torture myself with reading the 'don't read parts?!'
Anyways, nice chapter, and hey I made it to chapter 18 right? :D
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 13 . 10/31/2013
Enter Star wars! Good lord I could never keep up with myself in this type of writing situation. Once more I am humbled...and slightly emasculated. Great chapter. :)
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
Very interesting chapter. As they all tend to be of course. :D
Thanks a lot for the forewarning of the mature content darn you, and yes I did read the warning but I still ended up reading the section, because I don't like to skip! D:
Interesting how Arda was integrated and all. I was kinda hoping that Eru would make an appearance but oh well. Will keep on reading!
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 4 . 10/15/2013
Man this story is absolutely insane in a cool kinda way of course. :D
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Well I am thoroughly confused as to what's going on but you do have my attention so far. :)
| The-killer-of-007 chapter 34 . 5/29/2013
Ho crap im feling sorry for pore spark now that the TSA is there to help:3
| Garion Faldor chapter 34 . 5/29/2013
My friend, you are capable of a great many things, all of them awesome. I am not likely to forget that and I'm glad to see you were finally able to post a chapter. :-) I will be posting one soon, I just need to make sure all the kinks and angles are worked out.
Nice to see Dani and the others in action again though I do wonder why they couldn't pick up the Flood with their senses. It will be interesting to see how this plays out. Overall it was a nice chapter, a bit short but that's okay, given everything. Will the Flood finally be a worthy opponent to the TSA, or will the TSA steamroll over them too? :-)
"Alex Possible" huh? Does he have a sister named Kim in SpecOps? ;-)
Saw a few grammar mistakes and odd sentences but nothing major. All in all a great chapter.
I hope the problems with your family are resolved, I know things between you and them aren't always easy. I also hope the medical tests came back positive, you need some good news after all that.
*hugs* Be well!
| Doll-Fin-Chick chapter 34 . 5/29/2013
Like I said, loved the action I hope your family crisis and health are better!
and one more thing...HUMMER! 3
| Garion Faldor chapter 33 . 2/13/2013
Quite a busy chapter. :-) I'm glad to see you were finally able to post. Ironically, even though I enjoy seeing the TSA whip everyone's butt, it's nice to see they aren't completely invincible. The action was fast-paced and fairly intense. I was a bit surprised that the twins would ride their vehicle right into the thick of things seemingly without support around them but I suppose if it came down to it they could probably annihilate the entire battle group with magic without breaking a sweat. The space battle was enjoyable too, again nice to see the Greenleaf can actually be damaged, even though it takes a hell of a lot to hurt it. Skyleaf huh? Heh, I may use that idea in the future. Hope you don't mind if it swipe it at some point.
| Doll-Fin-Chick chapter 33 . 2/13/2013
Review Review Review! lol You already know what I think of this chapter ;) Hawt action (in more than one way) and awesome battle tech scenes! I'll join in the pitchfork and torch brigade and advance on those who forget to review XD
| Chronomentrophobia chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Y'know, the whole romance thing occasionally turned me off the story. I guess it's kind of subjective, eh? Ya gotta take the bad with the good. For example, I don't like tomatoes, but if you take it out of spaghetti sauce then it's not spaghetti sauce anymore.
I want to eat some eyeballs straight from the sardine tin.
| krill64 chapter 32 . 12/7/2012
Awesome story, update soon.
| The-killer-of-007 chapter 32 . 11/18/2012
Ok I've read all the chaps and am now waiting for the next o e if is not out by the end of the year you may have to face one of my pet zerglings but if you can come up with a good reason I well call it off
Ps. Can you see if the drags can some how go to the SC gal? :)
| The-killer-of-007 chapter 25 . 11/18/2012
Ok I'm thinking you are playing to much sins or you are in live with it coz I hade that hapin to me with SC1(man that game wiz fun) and I think you are making the TSA a bit OP(over powered) with all of the PD and cannon on the ships
| The-killer-of-007 chapter 18 . 11/18/2012
Well all I can think of now is with game/movie is going to be dragooned up next with 500KT to 1MT nukes so good for you I live anything to do with massive KR-BOOMS and large nombers of guns(and to my knowledge the G-18 has three firing modes FA/three round/SA with its biggest mag a 33/32 ronunder if I'm not right some help is k)