|Reviews for Shadowfire: The Metallics|
| Doll-Fin-Chick chapter 35 . 7/6/2014
The hummer lol I still can't get over the hummer! Is there anything the Greenleaf can't handle? Looking forward to where you're taking this next
| Ny'Kle chapter 35 . 6/29/2014
lots of things not making sense though, with the seemingly careless throwing about of the word Isoton, while the people using the weapons that have the isoton word are inside an small, and enclosed space
other than an few other things, this is an very very good story
| Ny'Kle chapter 11 . 6/27/2014
uhmm... very very good...
except on thing...
it says somewhere in here that they loaded an "monster" 2cm shell...
errr...that's not very big.. especially when set up beside an 155mm shell.
an 2cm shell is only 20mm...
now, if you meant to say like...200cm shell, then yes, I would whole heartedly agree, that that Is an monster shell
... you know, just giving my two cents...
| Garion Faldor chapter 35 . 6/27/2014
Well this was an interesting twist with Guilty Spark, didn't see that coming, having never read the Halo Wiki. It'll be interesting to see what happens with Cortana and the Index at this point. I wonder what's going to happen after the Greenleaf finishes its business with the UNSC.
More please! :-)
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 18 . 10/31/2013
Damnable bikini! Argh! I will never be free of the mental images of that outfit, and darn you for not only that BUT another mature scene! Why do I torture myself with reading the 'don't read parts?!'
Anyways, nice chapter, and hey I made it to chapter 18 right? :D
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 13 . 10/31/2013
Enter Star wars! Good lord I could never keep up with myself in this type of writing situation. Once more I am humbled...and slightly emasculated. Great chapter. :)
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
Very interesting chapter. As they all tend to be of course. :D
Thanks a lot for the forewarning of the mature content darn you, and yes I did read the warning but I still ended up reading the section, because I don't like to skip! D:
Interesting how Arda was integrated and all. I was kinda hoping that Eru would make an appearance but oh well. Will keep on reading!
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 4 . 10/15/2013
Man this story is absolutely insane in a cool kinda way of course. :D
| Lord Exar Kun chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Well I am thoroughly confused as to what's going on but you do have my attention so far. :)
| The-killer-of-007 chapter 34 . 5/29/2013
Ho crap im feling sorry for pore spark now that the TSA is there to help:3
| Garion Faldor chapter 34 . 5/29/2013
My friend, you are capable of a great many things, all of them awesome. I am not likely to forget that and I'm glad to see you were finally able to post a chapter. :-) I will be posting one soon, I just need to make sure all the kinks and angles are worked out.
Nice to see Dani and the others in action again though I do wonder why they couldn't pick up the Flood with their senses. It will be interesting to see how this plays out. Overall it was a nice chapter, a bit short but that's okay, given everything. Will the Flood finally be a worthy opponent to the TSA, or will the TSA steamroll over them too? :-)
"Alex Possible" huh? Does he have a sister named Kim in SpecOps? ;-)
Saw a few grammar mistakes and odd sentences but nothing major. All in all a great chapter.
I hope the problems with your family are resolved, I know things between you and them aren't always easy. I also hope the medical tests came back positive, you need some good news after all that.
*hugs* Be well!
| Doll-Fin-Chick chapter 34 . 5/29/2013
Like I said, loved the action I hope your family crisis and health are better!
and one more thing...HUMMER! 3
| Garion Faldor chapter 33 . 2/13/2013
Quite a busy chapter. :-) I'm glad to see you were finally able to post. Ironically, even though I enjoy seeing the TSA whip everyone's butt, it's nice to see they aren't completely invincible. The action was fast-paced and fairly intense. I was a bit surprised that the twins would ride their vehicle right into the thick of things seemingly without support around them but I suppose if it came down to it they could probably annihilate the entire battle group with magic without breaking a sweat. The space battle was enjoyable too, again nice to see the Greenleaf can actually be damaged, even though it takes a hell of a lot to hurt it. Skyleaf huh? Heh, I may use that idea in the future. Hope you don't mind if it swipe it at some point.
| Doll-Fin-Chick chapter 33 . 2/13/2013
Review Review Review! lol You already know what I think of this chapter ;) Hawt action (in more than one way) and awesome battle tech scenes! I'll join in the pitchfork and torch brigade and advance on those who forget to review XD
| Chronomentrophobia chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Y'know, the whole romance thing occasionally turned me off the story. I guess it's kind of subjective, eh? Ya gotta take the bad with the good. For example, I don't like tomatoes, but if you take it out of spaghetti sauce then it's not spaghetti sauce anymore.
I want to eat some eyeballs straight from the sardine tin.