Reviews for Fire
Papa Albarn chapter 1 . 12/17/2014

You probably don't know this—considering I'm basically no one and I have yet to become dedicated enough to write a fanfic—but I'm possibly you're biggest fan ever.
This was literally my first AkuRoku fanfic I had ever read on . It's paved the way for others I believe. I've read several of your others and I can't stay away.
On rainy days I come back and re-read this, reliving the warm gushy feelings of a fangirl.

I'm not quite sure if you even still use , but I was wondering if you'd allow me to repost this on Archive Of Our Own? If not, I understand.

Fanficfan0466 chapter 61 . 10/23/2014
Oh my god! By the end of the story I was crying! The ending couldn't be more perfect! The feels in this story are too much to handle. I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
LumpyNarwhal chapter 61 . 1/7/2014
For someone's first fic, this utterly magnificent. With the exception of a few spelling and grammatical errors, everything was perfect. Fantastic job.
ElectroNerd chapter 38 . 11/30/2013
This chapter will always be so cute to me, no matter how many times I read it! Neee! I love Riku and Sora! They're so cute. XD
0Koji-chan chapter 59 . 11/21/2013
I absolutely LOVE Fire so if you were to write a prequel about Leon and Cloud, that would be AMAZING! I've been curious about how the two met BEFORE adopting Sora and Roxas
Bee chapter 61 . 11/11/2013
You probably never look at the reviews for this anymore,but I just wanted to say to you, You've always been my favorite fantfiction writer,maybe even my favorite writer. And I just love your work..This is my favorite fanfiction,the best i've ever read,and i just...Thank you so much. I reread all the time. And I'll never stop.
Never feel unmotivated.
Never. ever.
-From your forever #1 fan
Guest chapter 40 . 7/7/2013
Too, too funny. You're killing me!
fanfictionlove900 chapter 39 . 7/7/2013
fanfictionlove900 chapter 37 . 7/7/2013
This story is wonderful! Sorry you were uncomfortable writing it. It did not come across in your writing. It was hot and lots of fun to read. The way they are teasing themselves I wonder if they will be able to hold out until Roxas is legal. Probably they will, but I don't think I could. Going back to read now. Great story!
IceLilyLaura chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Honestly, this is the second time I'm reading this story and I still love it. I can't believe it's your first fanfic.
For one thing, this whole plot is completely original, as far as I'm concerned. Orphans? A cop and firefighter for dads? I mean, who comes up with this? YOU, ya brilliant little writer
Next, this isnt just some little oneshot. THIS BYOTCH HAS 61 CHAPTERS. Dayum girl. I have to applaud you for that. You completed it, thank god.
Finally, the way you paint the characters.. your pairings are kinda all my favorites - at least now haha. I wasn't always a yaoi girl, but now... :) I've officially joined the club. You get an internet award.

Obviously, though, there are a few things here and there that I don't like, but most of them are small things- maybe the grammar wasn't perfect, but they're easily overlooked.

To wrap up, 10/10 would recommend.
Guest chapter 54 . 2/27/2013
Woah. Woah woah woah. Part of ch 54 was a bit unbelievable to me, as Roxas does have the chief of police as his father and could just report this guy. However, with Roxas's personality in the story I can see where it'd come from. Holy mess. I was reading this in the middle of class and when I saw that I just shut my phone and sat jaw dropped for the rest of class. Just.. Woah.
IceLilyLaura chapter 10 . 2/23/2013
SO MUCH RELATIONSHIP ADVICE. ACTUALLY SO MUCH ADVICE IN GENERAL I'm a bit excited as to what will happen with Larxene and Luxord.
IceLilyLaura chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
... Well that escalated quickly. Dayum.
IceLilyLaura chapter 6 . 2/23/2013
I bet I look really weird right now, making weird faces and squealing in joy at random intervals.
Goddamnit yaoi. Y U DO DIS TO ME?
IcyHeartedQueen chapter 61 . 2/21/2013
I really liked the way you give every character a particular personality, the story is original and intense! )
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