Reviews for Atonement
zaubernuss chapter 20 . 5/29
I hope you haven't given up on this one! It was amazing to see how you - to my opinion - have developed as a writer from chapter to chapter. There are still a few points I would point out to you if if I was your beta in the first chapters, but I have had absolutely nothing to complain about in the second half of the story.
You did an especially amazing job of slowly developing that attraction between Hermione and Snape. It started so innocently, it would have been hardly noticable if I wasn't looking out for it (knowing it was a SS/HG story from the description). It was very believable, too. I very much like the internal monologue that shows how they are trying to rationalize and cope with their surprising feelings, just as I believe those rather brainy people would.
The story is picking up nicely, too. I have my suspicions about the werewolf, but we'll see - that is, i very much hope that we will see! Please continue!
Guest chapter 20 . 3/15
Glad you are back!
BCgurlie chapter 20 . 2/15
Love this story and the building relationship between Severus and Hermione! Can't wait to find out who the werewolf is!
Sassyluv chapter 20 . 2/14
He soooo cares for her...
Update!
Sassyluv xxx
RhodaBush chapter 20 . 2/8
More please
Very Small Prophet chapter 1 . 2/7
That little squabble between competing gangs confined to a single island was the biggest war the Wizarding World had ever seen? Really? A little terrorism, a coup, a few assassinations, and one pitched battle concluded by a single exchange of spells. If that’s the greatest war in the entire history of Magical Earth, wizards must be remarkable pacifists.
Thirteen Ravens chapter 19 . 1/3
Thanks for your story, it's enjoyable and I hope you find time to write more :)
Thirteen Ravens chapter 16 . 1/3
Brilliant - I'm enjoying this! :)
Also keeping me away from playing Farmville, which is a very good thing...
trashyreader chapter 19 . 12/1/2015
Keep going...good stuff.
LouBelle04 chapter 19 . 10/23/2015
Great chapter - I really like what you've done with it!
LBx
2NiCe4U chapter 19 . 10/13/2015
Love the tension between the two protagonists! please keep writing.
Sassyluv chapter 19 . 10/5/2015
I love this story so far!
Update soon!
Sassyluv xxx
Guest chapter 19 . 10/4/2015
This is such a well-written story! All of the characters are very in-character. I can't wait to read more! xx
r99smith chapter 19 . 10/2/2015
Thanks for the update, so glad you did not abandon the story
Vaila chapter 19 . 10/2/2015
Great story! I read it in one go! Keep on writing! I like the slow burn. Keep it so intense until they finaly can' t stop their attraction.
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