Reviews for Sam's Tale
Elenillor chapter 4 . 2/4/2002
Nice work, "Rosie"! :D I'm looking forward to more chapters.

Just a couple suggestions: It seems more likely to me that Rosie would call her mother "Mum" in the British fashion rather than "Mom" (Maybe even something more rustic or archaic? Not that I have a suggestion...).

You might want to include a bit about them keeping the saplings' roots damp with soil, sawdust, or something else that would hold the moisture until they can be planted. (I find myself worried about those little trees.)

There may be a more descriptive term than "outdoors clothes" when Rosie goes to change. (I do like your later explanation of what she's wearing.)

Elenillor
Ron's Girl chapter 3 . 2/3/2002
This is a great story so far. Looking forward to reading the rest:)
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