Reviews for Not In Service
I wanna be the very best chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I love this so much. You could have totally gone in a different direction... but I love what you did. )
LoveDandelion chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
loved
yunadustrial.twifan chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
i loved this. im a big fan of therteen. and twilight. i thought this was awsom. and i like the hole fack nomber thing. seems fair after she did it to trace in the movie.
Twilightgirl1724 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Okay... I didnt get it. I saw the movie several times and im still confused. This story doesnt make sense and wait she bumps into a boy. So who is the boy. This is really confusing.
HelioApple chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
this is good. i would really consider getting a beta to enrich it a little more! ((:
Melina95 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
i loved it.