Reviews for Night Watch
poeticlove88 chapter 4 . 7/5/2014
WHAT THE FUCKIN HELL MAN. WHAT DID THE SILK SPECTRE DO TO YOU HUH
Daniel Spine chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
WTF?! Did they ALL DIE?! In the movies some stupid teenagers handle Krueger and here a bunch of strongest smartest dudes fail. v_V
Vi-Violence chapter 10 . 2/20/2012
EW!
shampoo147 chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
You had me in tears when Daniel died. Love the story. Though, I don't think I'll be reading it for fun unless I really want to make myself sad.
12ofHearts chapter 10 . 9/28/2011
No...Where's the end?
12ofHearts chapter 5 . 9/28/2011
I seriously almost started crying at this chapter. It was bad enough that Ror's face is missing halfway through, and then he runs smack into Dan, and Dan is like der-der-der, and makes him all but Explain it.

Poooooor Ror. I love the way you do it, though. It's very moving.

I kind of can't wait till Adrian dies.
12ofHearts chapter 3 . 9/28/2011
no, wait, wow.

One thing, though. *looks around and hopes no one notices the first hand experience involved in this knowledge*

It's really hard to cut letters into skin. That's part of the reason, in the movies Freddy just signs his name or his initials. Jamming that much text on a guy as small as Ror would be REALLY pushing the limits of how legibly one can write in human wounds.
12ofHearts chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
And then there are the Nightmare fans who saw Watchmen for the first time and screamed "FREDDY!"

Though, I'm sorry, your Jackie Earle Haley, though fantastic, will never come close to the claws of my Robert Englund.
Dee chapter 10 . 9/16/2011
Wow. I'm not a horror person and keep a safe distance from movies like the Elm Street series. I also only recently found Watchmen. I started reading this story because I was curious, and I found I couldn't stop! I could feel the tension building, and very unexpected things started happening. I REALLY want to know what happens when Rorschach and Freddy have their epic showdown.

Can't wait to see what happens!
Kimauri chapter 10 . 8/25/2011
Oh. My. Gosh. You're the guy. You're the writer-you're like my favorite writer on this site!

I started reading one of your other stories, a Dark Knight one, like right after the movie came out in theaters. Impromptu Affair! You pretty much re-newed my faith in this site, y'know, and convinced me that there are actually some worthwhile writers hanging out around here. I used to check Impromtu Affair's web page at least once a month just to see if you updated!

And then... THEN I FOUND THIS, YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON YOU! A Nightmare on Elm Street and a Watchmen crossover... Glorious! You're just so spot on with characterization and so funny with the dialogue. So many people mess up with those two.

I can't believe you actually killed everyone off though. That's amazing writing to be able to pull that off-too many people are too scared, and the story just winds up lacking. But not you!

Rorschach is, seriously, my favorite Watchmen character, and watching the Nightmare remake sorta turned me into a Jackie Earle Haley fan. You have taken it to its logical conclusion. Thank you.
Heather chapter 10 . 5/6/2011
Absolutely loved it so far! Keep up the excellent work.
Spartan Altego chapter 10 . 4/5/2011
Rorschach alone? Can't say I didn't see that coming, though the incident with the two Fakes did get me going for a moment. Though it seems odd that Kruger would keep Rorschach alive, it seems to be the fatal flaw of all horror villans: They take their damn time.

Plot's still moving fast, and I found no errors in spelling, spacing, etc. Good job.

~S-A128~
johncorn chapter 10 . 4/5/2011
Poor poor Rorschach
Justasimplekidfrombrooklyn chapter 10 . 4/5/2011
...

rorschach better survive this :

or i will hunt you down freddie style D!
GrimlyFiendish chapter 10 . 4/5/2011
WOW, they're all gone :0

That was a bit of a shock.

Great work :)
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