|Reviews for Fighting For True Love COMPLETE|
| kathyjo chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
I don't know I do not think voldermort would be that stupid if they found out he was in love with a "mudblood" then they would have to think he was not fully loyal..great story so far though.
| JaneA0202 chapter 4 . 8/11/2011
oh no, I was hoping that this wouldnt be another story with Hermione pregnant while in school...
and I have a bad feeling about Draco...either he will fall in love with her or Lucius will be angry...
| JaneA0202 chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
the plot is very interesting, even though I usually dont like when she and Severus are in relationship while she is still in school, but since she is twenty, I dont mind. The problem for me is, that she doesnt act like she is twenty, but like fifteen years old girl..I didnt like her "speech" in headmasters office, it sounded so weird...but maybe only I think so...also Im not happy that Severuss and Hermiones relationship is "everybodys bussines"
And I hope she isnt pregnant...
ok, Im going to read more...
|Alexa1993 chapter 21 . 9/1/2010|
| Grania chapter 4 . 5/7/2010
Okay, I've read four chapters so far. The plot is good, but as far as I can tell, there is no motivation for Severus having his memory modified. Without motivation for big things like that to make up the plot, the story is not believable.
Plus, there is far too much agreement in your dialogue. People just don't agree that much in real life. The only opposition I have found so far is where Severus refuses Hermione the night he returns. There needs to be a lot more. The plot twist of Severus' memory being removed is the only thing that is keeping me reading right now; because as a whole, your story is not believable as it stands.
| sarah271995 chapter 21 . 4/13/2010
| myheartbelongstoseverus chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Your story line is really good, but there are some typos (it's "through," not "thru") and mistakes in regards to the series (for instance, Snape's middle name is Tobias). If you need a beta/editor I'll gladly go through and help fix up some of the issues. But I do enjoy the story after getting past these issues
| sjrodgers23 chapter 21 . 4/12/2010
thanks for the story please keep writing
| notwritten chapter 20 . 4/12/2010
This reading is interesting.. Keep smiling. :-)
| CeliaEquus chapter 21 . 4/12/2010
I've said it before, and I'll say it again: 'Hurrah for happy endings!'
| Prissz chapter 21 . 4/12/2010
Wow, that was a wonderful story. Are you going to finish, Love's Journeys, on the AdultFanFic site? I keep checking daily to see if that one is updated :-)
I really love reading your stories and you are one of my favorite authors. I'm hoping besides finishing the other story you'll also write another HGSS story.
| lovingshewolf chapter 16 . 4/10/2010
this is excellent story I love it keep coming :)
| notwritten chapter 16 . 4/8/2010
Interesting reading. Keep smiling. :-)
| jessirose85 chapter 16 . 4/8/2010
I have just read the chapters that are labelled 12-16 x
This is a fantastic story x
Please keep adding to it xx
| mom2divas chapter 12 . 4/8/2010
Ah ha, I was right. Now onto the next chapter...