|Reviews for The Unfortunate|
| Writer With Sprite chapter 13 . 6/24
| rowenasheir chapter 13 . 6/3
I really would like a companion story where after SS realised what happened to Harry on the night of their bonding bilds a life for Harry and his child. Need a happier ending. OR SS saves the fetus, has tto help Harry's magic to keep the child to term and then build a life together.
| twinkminded chapter 13 . 4/22
Wow. This is nothing like any other Snarry story I've read.
| XxXxSketcher2014xXxX chapter 13 . 12/14/2014
| Kay Kay chapter 13 . 6/10/2014
Wow. That was depressing! But so well-written. I'm sorry for both Harry & Severus. What a crappy life! :(
| Kay Kay chapter 13 . 6/8/2014
Wow. That was depressing. Perfect tale of two broken souls (and very well-written!). Very, very sad. I feel sorry for both of them!
| ZianaSue chapter 13 . 5/16/2014
So very tragic.. Well written but too tragic for my liking... I as a rule don't like stories with no happy ending... When I read the title and summary I figured the unforunate must become fortunate at some point in the story telling. It had started to become good and then did a 180 and went back to tragic. So sad.. I'm glad my mind could never have created this story. I would be worried for my conscience and mental health if it ever did.
Enough of my rambling.. As I said well written but tragic
| AnetteRuby chapter 13 . 4/2/2014
| NA chapter 13 . 1/8/2014
My god, you just made me hate my two favorite characters... Well, from this story at least. Next time I think I will pick through EVERY author's not just so that I will not find a story like this one ever again! This fic was incredible beautifully written, even though the POV irked me endlessly. I was't depressing per say but I do wish I hadn't read it! I am sorry if this sounds rude or anything but I was expecting a brilliant Mpreg, and I go... this...
| Jen Belle chapter 13 . 12/29/2013
So sad I read this out of curiosity. I love Severus yet you made me hate this one because to me he lacks a soul. Good story, but I hate how it ended it is like a Nicholas Sparks novel sad, but good. You are a great writer, but you could have given Severus some of the good that made Lily love him, and Harry name his one son Albus Severus. This one reminds me of my grandfather that I have not seen since I was ten because of him being a horrible man.
| dem bones chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
I'm going to be honest I didn't dare read chapters 1-7 because let's face it if I read those I'd be even more depressed than I was after reading chapter 8-13. I only have myself to blame for reading a story that had a bunch of warnings that it was going to be depressing but I was compelled to see what would happen.
At first I thought it was a very plausible explanation and I got very depressed that if Snape and Harry in a sense couldn't have a happy ending who in this world possibly can because Harry was so spot on and Snape sounded so in-character but...
When one of the chapters mentioned that Snape had did something to Harry after drinking I'm saying to myself, what is the likelihood that either or them don't find some loophole and that Harry take that kind of behavior even if he is forced into and it was highly unprobable in my mind. It helped me cope with this fic believe it or not because by the end of it I was feeling very terrible that Snape had to die because no one could tell he was depressed. If Dumbledore forced him into that, at least there could be some hope for the man. I was twice as bitter by the fact that Harry didn't stop the relationship at the start.
At the beginning of this fic Harry is innocent but he also comes across as stupid. If this is post HBP, Harry should already be aware that Snape isn't an option with how mentally unstable he is. I think Harry has some idea of when his life is in are danger with living with the Dursleys. Snape threw a jar of cockroaches at him fifth year and is revealed to be a former death eater at that point and since this is a somewhat realistic point of view of these kind of fics, it makes me wonder why the heck didn't Harry find a way out of it in the first place. Of course it's clear that this is a what if scenario conveying 'if Harry had no brains and married a depressed, spiteful, abusive drunk Snape in a world that parallels the real one except it has male pregnancy, the Ministry of Magic dictates the entire world...muggle included and the school personel can hire mentally unstable people/potentially abusive people with hopes of it ending happily.
Rebelling against the marriage law at it's worse would only be death and the way I see it is if Harry was put to death he probably would have winded up that way in the first place given the situation. Even with being sent to Azkaban, at least there is more of a chance that even if something as worse as what happened in this fic occurred then at least his soul would be at peace being ingested by dementors so he wouldn't even have to be alive to witness it.
| JAK chapter 13 . 7/17/2013
I have something to say to you.
Bravo. I mean it, I really do. This story was amazing. Very dark and a wonderful change from all of that candy floss fluff that usually clutters up fanfiction. Usually people would have had Harry slowly learn to live with his loss and move on but I never bought that. This story line seems much more likely than Harry and Snape falling in love and defeating Voldemort. This was beautifully crafted and the ending with Harry's alias almost brought me to tears and I don't know why. Any author who can do that should be proud indeed. So take a now because you deserve it.
| HarryRemusSirius chapter 13 . 7/15/2013
Sorry about that very long review. I'm reading this on my phone and I can't tell if it was complete. It was a good wnding in the end. I thought it would be longer, but I have to say it was wonderful.
| HarryRemusSirius chapter 11 . 7/15/2013
Do they, somewhere in the futur, make up some how? Do they try again? Does he show Harry what its actually like to love? I don't even know what that's like. Is there going to be a pairing...and not just this...hate. Will it become romantically in the end...or near futur. I hope it does because I think this story needs that ending. Just somebody to love both of them, so why not each other. He admited that he didn't hate Harry. Please tell me what you are planning. Message back.
| Potterhead21 chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
That was...That was one of the best stories I've ever read on here. I like how you didn't make them all "Oh, we're married now so we can get along just fine and Snape can stop being Snape and we all have a happy ending". I truly believe the word needs an unhappy end sometimes. But, shame about the baby though, he quite grew on me.