Reviews for The Unfortunate
MiciChrysDCMWL1980 chapter 13 . 10/10
Oh, God! Why did they have to suffer so much! Excellent story, but I have no choice other than to go cry myself to sleep now!
AnimeObsessed326 chapter 13 . 8/27
I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this. The perfect tragedy. Very well done. I will now go and cry to my hearts content.
Blue Crystal Waters chapter 13 . 7/23
Oh god... That was... huh... I'm gonna... stay in bed for a couple days and cry.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/15
You had me crying all pf the last three chapter. Beautifully done.
Seapatrol chapter 13 . 6/19
Sad but fitting pm at seapatrol if needed I'm not logged in
Amari chapter 13 . 4/25
I regret living.
lilyflower101 chapter 13 . 12/15/2015
I cried reading this. It was a good story.
scgaraycochea chapter 13 . 11/16/2015
Excelente! A wonderful story.
It was sad but beautifull at the same time.
You are a great writer I will continue reading your fanfics.
Thank you for share it
Writer With Sprite chapter 13 . 6/24/2015
Well done!
rowenasheir chapter 13 . 6/3/2015
I really would like a companion story where after SS realised what happened to Harry on the night of their bonding bilds a life for Harry and his child. Need a happier ending. OR SS saves the fetus, has tto help Harry's magic to keep the child to term and then build a life together.
twinkminded chapter 13 . 4/22/2015
Wow. This is nothing like any other Snarry story I've read.
XxXxSketcher2014xXxX chapter 13 . 12/14/2014
Well fuck.
Kay Kay chapter 13 . 6/10/2014
Wow. That was depressing! But so well-written. I'm sorry for both Harry & Severus. What a crappy life! :(
Kay Kay chapter 13 . 6/8/2014
Wow. That was depressing. Perfect tale of two broken souls (and very well-written!). Very, very sad. I feel sorry for both of them!
ZianaSue chapter 13 . 5/16/2014
So very tragic.. Well written but too tragic for my liking... I as a rule don't like stories with no happy ending... When I read the title and summary I figured the unforunate must become fortunate at some point in the story telling. It had started to become good and then did a 180 and went back to tragic. So sad.. I'm glad my mind could never have created this story. I would be worried for my conscience and mental health if it ever did.

Enough of my rambling.. As I said well written but tragic
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