Reviews for Gabby Shipman
julieeee0798 chapter 7 . 1/3/2014
Please update, if this isn't the final chapter
Lady Elena Bella Petrova chapter 7 . 3/24/2012
love this story and chapter so far! can't wait to read more of this story!
sfbxfcb chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
mrs.addiecullen chapter 7 . 5/14/2011
very good
tonu1234 chapter 3 . 6/9/2010
Your format is xcruciatingly confusing. You might want to work on that. Also, the story itself isn’t very strong. There’s not a whole lot going on in each chapter and it’s very scattered. The basis of the story is that Aaron and Torrance have a child together, one that is around 3 years old given her behavior and development, which means Torrance would have given birth at the very latest at 15 years old. Do you explore that in further chapters? I don’t have enough interest to read the last four, but you might want to think about that.
jessirose85 chapter 6 . 3/30/2010
First 6 chapters were great xx