Reviews for The Field Trip or Murphy's Law
ShadowPlayah623 chapter 16 . 6/20
If Trunks was 13 when Future Gohan died, and Pan was 4, doesnt that mean that since Trunks spent 2 days in the Hyper Bolic Time Chamber and that he went to the normal timeline when he was 16 that Pan should be 7? I mean, you did say Trunks was 18.
megacharizat chapter 1 . 4/21
the story is looking nice, I look forward to reading other chapters.
LOLZZZZ chapter 18 . 8/19/2016
OK ether these chapters are very short or I read to fast ether way I'm pised but still
Lolzzzz chapter 9 . 8/18/2016
TREE SAPPY:3:3:3 sorry but I had to:(
Guest chapter 17 . 8/11/2016
hit on bulma or pass himself
Kenneth Phoenix chapter 30 . 2/28/2016
Great chap! Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/30/2015
THIS IS STORY IS GREAT.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/9/2015
I know yamcha is weak, but pan should not be able to even scratch him.
dbz chapter 36 . 7/6/2015
Please more gohan and video romantic love with pan
Ladysky chapter 24 . 6/28/2015
(If you still read reviews after 12 years which I doubt
;;-_-) this story is AWEsome and totally hilarious! Heck I even like the author notes XD very nice job!
dreamist chapter 19 . 6/17/2015
Why didn't you kill off sharpener
Gohan's Gurl12 chapter 36 . 4/13/2015
Wonderful story. I love it. Chi chi's too grandbaby obssesed. If she was nagging me like that she would get no grandbabies. Glad my moms not like that. Oh who am I kidding. At least not that bad.
Saiyan name Kona chapter 36 . 4/3/2015
Hello I am a saiyan named Kona, and my review is that you must continue the story before I die of suspense. I love this story. please continue. ( Please do not steal my name, I own Kona, if you decide to use the name you WILL say you don't own her )
vinayakdj1 chapter 28 . 3/21/2015
maybe sharpner should unlock d legendary super human...
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...im 12 yrs too late
gabelou1991 chapter 36 . 3/17/2015
J'aime c'est trop drĂ´le.
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