|Reviews for Ink|
| Hi Mom Hi Dad Hi Bitches chapter 46 . 2/28
So, if you finish your part, I'll finish mine.
| Hannah chapter 46 . 2/27
Ahhhhhh! Need next chapter! It's soooo good!
| Sexysacer chapter 30 . 2/8
i swear every time i reread this story i take something else from it!
i hope you can put us out of our misery and update soon! :)
| Tellyredux chapter 46 . 2/5
Well this is frustrating...is there a plan to finish this story. Seems a shame to leave it hanging after 46 chapters and all this effort. :(
| Guest chapter 46 . 1/21
Hi! I don't know if you've forgotten about this story or if this is just normal writing lag, but I absolutely love this story and I'm dying to see it finished! Please don't give up! My first serious girlfriend was blackout the first time we met too - we just broke up so it's nice to see Noamily the OTP sort it out :)
| guest chapter 46 . 12/28/2013
Great fic but i really really want Keffy, i love those two together.
| SuperGirI chapter 46 . 12/17/2013
Such an amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing. Can't wait for more.
| becky36336 chapter 46 . 11/21/2013
I love this fic.. need more naomily though.! :)
| scriptmanip chapter 43 . 11/13/2013
** posting my review of chapter 46 here because is a cock-and-balls brekkie plate and won't let me post twice on the same chapter **
I realised the other day, a little belatedly perhaps, that this story is ending [theoretically], which means just one more I'll not get to anticipate showing up in my notifications inbox. And, realising that makes me sad. I'll miss Ink, is what I'm saying, once it's over.
I'll miss it for lines like this, which are so spot on, it's annoying you don't spend all your free-time writing more of them instead of living your actual life with your actual girlfriend doing actual, socially-interactive things:
"They've ordered room service and Cook's arranged his bacon and eggs to resemble a cock and balls. Would you like to see the photo?"
But it's not even just that - which is perfection, which is *so* Effy - it's that she then turns her phone towards Emily as if to really drive the point home that there is, in fact, a photo of Cook's cock-and-balls breakfast. It's so fucking rare that writers give us scenes that come to life on the page, that they give us dialogue that we can actually hear inside our heads. But this whole entire chapter, you've done just that. And, as you know, I fucking love you for it. More, more!
There's still an unsettled emotional draw between Emily and Effy too, as there should be. And it's so subtle and so slight, also as it should be. Effy is going to joke about Cook and his filthy breakfast photos, but then she's also quite upset that she's not able to be that person for Emily anymore, when she's hurting. It's so very Effy, and it's so very well done here. The Effy will wait until Emily's left the room to show any sort of emotion on how Emily's, essentially, rejected her.
The hotel scene and all its character dynamics: more perfection.
I love this line for the humour but also, oh god my heart, because I just can't help but feel it's the subtlest of Emily references because dammit Naomi just can't help herself from calling mention to this girl she's spent the last however many days attached to:
"Firstly, from what I know of the process, it was you who was doing the pushing and secondly ... gross."
It's funny because it's Naomi. And then it's heartbreaking because Emily is pre-med. And whether or not that part of the "process" is fairly common knowledge, regardless of being in love with a medical student, I'm going to live my life under the assumption that Naomi means she's suffered through Emily's tales of women in labour. That on those nights where they're meant to be studying and keeping their clothes on for a change, sometimes Emily just can't help herself from getting hyped about her future profession, and about the gross intricacies of her very 'hands on' studies in the hospital. And Naomi, because she loves her insanely, just cringes through the more technically gruesome details, and lets Emily babble on about women in labour. It's what she meant when she says this line to her mum, and you can't convince me otherwise.
Okay, back to more of your brilliant characterisations.
I swear on the sleeves of Alexis Krauss, when I got to this bit of description I was picturing IN MY HEAD before even reading the words, Cook jumping on the bed. Because, obviously, it's Cook. And then, you go ahead and describe it perfectly as I already saw it happening.
But then, oh god, she's covering the tatt! Broke my heart a bit here, Blondie. I've got to be honest. Again, extremely honest behaviour here we see from predictably avoiding Naomi. Can't deal with it? Cover it up. Problem solved.
The ending here, yes you guessed it, more perfection. Keiran is very Keiran. Naomi is very Naomi. And basically, we may as well just be watching them smoke fags on the steps outside Roundview in series 3, ep 6.
For it being a shorter length, it was filled with so much goodness, I didn't even mind that it wasn't longer [except for that I always want more]. You're doing these girls justice. You're doing the story justice. And I am along for the ride no matter how long it takes us to get there.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I've a book club to get to ;)
| La la chapter 46 . 11/6/2013
| Gay Twin chapter 46 . 11/4/2013
I found this just recently and read the whole thing in three days. Like, FUCK, the feels are real3
| shewritesforher chapter 46 . 10/27/2013
It has been awhile since I have been on her... but I got an email about your last update and couldn't stop myself from revisiting your work... I started from the beginning again and just like that I am here... excited to see what the next chapter will hold! Thank you for your excellent piece of writing... I always look forward to an update!
| jaybonesss23 chapter 46 . 10/25/2013
Keiran is actually the cutest human being on the planet, that little bumbling speech was precious. And I love how you captured Gina, it's so perfectly written. Can't wait for the next :)
| sarahlily567 chapter 46 . 10/24/2013
You truly have no idea how big of a smile I got after checking my e-mail and seeing the Ink story update. I really liked this chapter even if they aren't together at the moment. It had severl simply adorable moments to accent the sad awe poor Ems stuff. Thank you for updating Blondie! :)
| Reddawg82 chapter 46 . 10/24/2013
Always a pleasure to see a chapter update email from you!
I have to say I didn't realize you also lived in Cali. I laughed quite a bit. Small world and all that. Unless I completely read that wrong, or maybe my brain is sleeping.
Either way, congrats on your partnership!
Yeah, naoms is miserable, so is Ems. Gotta love Kieran for tying, he is awkwardly hilarious! Totally love their little chats! And then there's lovey Gina... Amazing lady, she is.
I can't wait for more! :)