|Reviews for Peter Pan|
| Lucia Ten chapter 10 . 9/11/2016
I want more BXG ROMANCE!
| Lucia Ten chapter 9 . 9/11/2016
Omg so gorgeos Vegeta is back! I love him! He is such a good dad...or not. But I love him
| Lucia Ten chapter 5 . 9/11/2016
I want B and G to be happy
| Lucia Ten chapter 4 . 9/11/2016
I want B and G to get closer!
| Lucia Ten chapter 3 . 9/11/2016
Omg VEGETA is gone? Poor Trunks! Poor I Bulma! But let us face it: V and C are powerless against BxG's love!
I want them to go away and have an adventure!
| Lucia Ten chapter 2 . 9/11/2016
Oh well done! This is such a lovely story!
At the beginning I loved BxG, than BxY and GxC. When Goku was taler I went back to BxG and I'm still theres. I love their relationship. Do you know other good stories?
| Zanzar chapter 10 . 3/2/2016
What happens next and when is the next chapter?
| Smithback chapter 10 . 9/30/2015
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/23/2013
So the story is already complete, but I still wanted to add my voice of encouragement. Four chapters in and I'm loving it. The characters are perfectly believable, I love Vegeta and Chichi in this fic (doesn't bash or kill them off) and Goku is still Goku, just a little more mature than the anime/manga version. This pairing seems like a logical and wonderful couple and I'm so glad this is the first G/B fic I've read. I can't wait to keep reading!
| thewonderingman chapter 10 . 7/5/2012
First thing I want to say is, F #$ the haters, F #$ them hard. I can't believe people would flame you, for writing something a little diffrent. Their just mad they don't have the talent to wright a story nearly as good as this one.
Anyways, the story was realy smooth, I breazed right threw it and enjoyed every second of it, besides a few times there where I almost teared up, don't tell any of my friends.
I thought the way you conveyed each individuals emotions was incredible, I could allmost feel the desperation and sadness, again it was anamazing read.
but yeah I look forward to the sequal
| Daevanam Daevo chapter 10 . 11/25/2011
This was great! I really loved the basic concept of the story and how perfect the title is (I really am obsessed with the art of titling...) I love your writing style! Great work!
| Rest In Piece chapter 10 . 12/29/2010
that was an awesome first part of the story! cnat wait to read the others :)...uh, so what are they called so i can find them lol...i bet they are gonna be eic just like this one :)
| Rest In Piece chapter 4 . 12/29/2010
i think ur story is great so far! sorry i didnt review the first few chapters, but sometimes i get carried away in reading the story and i forget to scroll down that extra little bit to review...but anyway lol, awesome story so far :)
| Cal reflector chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
This is an amazing story. The opening chapter contrasts how Goku has more or less remained a child at heart while Bulma has grown up into a unhappy adult, and how much happier the former is for it. Both of their lives are painfully imperfect, but unlike Bulma, in spite of her genuis, Goku manages to see things more clearly due to his innocence.
The flashbacks were used wonderfully, highlighting how in the beginning it really was just Bulma and Goku on an adventure together. Goku's offer to just take her and go, and Bulma's heartbreaking refusal of that offer, was very powerful. That she's the first girl he's ever known-that she defines the female gender for him-and the idea that he's always been the one she turned to is sublime. The way you portray their relationship in the early chapters is lovely; I would use the word transcendant, as romance would be insufficient.
Their loyalty and devotion to each other is so deep-rooted and natural it's almost instinctive; the problem of course is that Bulma thinks too much, and Goku doesn't think enough.
| Gilded Blue chapter 10 . 6/11/2010
Oh wow! I really enjoyed this one!