Reviews for Ancient enlightenment
Matt101 chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Love the story keep it up.
Blackdex chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Little long on the update, but worth the wait i suppose. ciao
SinisterMeds chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
I think the idea behind this story is great! The only thing is...GET A BETA! or do some serious proofreading...there are a lot of mistakes that make reading your story difficult.
GunSmoke2 chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Awesome chapter, can't wait for more.
NabikiB chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Interesting read. Need to run over it with a spell checker, though.
Kingdark chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
I liked it. The chapter was of a decent length and that is always a great plus!

Good work.

thsunami chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Loved the chapter as alawys and nice use of both tech and the house elves.

Still hope he and hermione get together in the end, nice and interesting idea about the magics but i would imagene the dragon would have to be different as both animals especially phiniox are immortall and extremly powerful more so then a normal dragon ( i think was the books where a little unclear in the matter )
JFFP chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
awesome, have been waiting for this update for a while now.

Another good chapter the analisis of Harry's magic is a pretty cool idea, and the house elves doing his detentions? classic

Keep up the good work and cant wait for the next chapter!
montie1123 chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Another great chapter. I cant wait to see what comes from the orb that was in the car though. Please keep up the great work!
DoggyPaddle chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
great story. do the nanites affect Harry's body to heal and stop aging if he chose to? is dumbles evil and has stolen the Philosophers stone? Hope for more soon.
Samantha Carter-Potter chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
looking very good so far. I don't usually like stories that bash Hermione even in a small way, but you seem to do it well.

Would love to see how you continue this.

well, when you've got a piece of Voldemort's soul in you, there really aren't that many things are the bright side of that
VeryStickyGlue chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
It's good to have another chapter of this story.

I liked Hagrid's drunken recounting of the holomessage, it was a good and amusing idea.

Only complaint is..."AND" not "&"!
Goldenfightergirl chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
yay harry is a dragon awesome! XD
RobC chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
Good chapter. Interesting story so far.
karthik9 chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
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