Reviews for 3 Times He Told Bella, & the 1 Time She Believed
RosaBella75 chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
So glad you shared this with us! His asides killed me! Gotta love wicked funny vamp porn! :D

Thanks for doing what you do so well!
Indigo Dragonwings chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
This is so funny and cute! I L.O.V.E.d Edward's voice here, especially the mental comments (in parenthesis ;))! It made me snigger and giggle every time! Wonderfully written with a unique, fresh sense of humor! I'll read this again and again and again and still laugh every time! Thank you for your marvelous gift of humor and laughter in this wonderful one-shot!
Edlovesme chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Great story. Your stories are always so imaginative.
Calikisses chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
I really love your writing. All of your stories are so different in style, but they are all fantastic. They pull me in and I just can't stop until I've reached the end. This was just too funny. All of Edward's internal thoughts, the way it was written with parentheses, how he's trying to be honest with her and she doesnt believe him. It's fantastic. I wasn't expecting the end. I love how he buried her through the change! HAHA, classic! I love it!

lovy2711 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
I like this fun little read. Good job!
Saydonee chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
funny! and hey she did ask if he was going to change her lol
Violhaine chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
I liked this very much and you managed to cram in all the insane vampire lore while making it comedic. Darkward was just perfect and it's nice to meet a Bella with some guts. I hope you keep posting these. It was a lot of fun. Thank you.

CullenObsession114 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
loved it!
parrotchic chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
funny and sexy! loved it!
Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
This was hilarious.

Love love love Edward's inner monologue. And the way he waited for her in the end.

Thank you for sharing!
deenerneener chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
This was a lot of fun, and actually quite different from anything I've read before. I'm glad that he changed Bella and didn't just drain her; I like to think well of Edward, even when he's a real bloodsucker.

Thanks for sharing this!
polyphany chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
LOL, that was awesome!
rubell chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
lol, craziness in a chapter...loved it
bunnyslippersrok19 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
love it!
blondie AKA robin chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
I really like your (parenthetical) style. Very unique and engaging.

Edward's quite the cad...but we all like it rough sometimes. 8-)

One question (this'll sound quite distracted but...) The statue of Eve - is that a real statue you've seen? Care to share the name and/or artist?

Thanks for the fun read!

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