Reviews for 3 Times He Told Bella, & the 1 Time She Believed
ChaoticDna chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Sexy, cocky, dark Edward - just they way I love him. The ending was perfect, thank you.
k1942 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Edward is a smart-ass son-of-a-bitch, isn't he? I just loved him that way, too! Bella didn't have a prayer and probably didn't want one.
Just4ALE chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I like your crack fic-type stories, lol
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Cute and a little warped. He did tell her though
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I loved it so good funny too
in-a-requiem chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Haha. I could really identify with Bella here, as my eyes often hurt from the amount of eye rolling I do on a regular basis. And if I was still in high school, I would probably start my own vampire club too. Hahaha. Yeaaah. I totally would.

Too funny.
Jimmerjammer chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Good quicky.
MarLea Pie chapter 1 . 3/5/2011

Yes! to the b*tchy Bella.

Yes! to the delicious Edward.

And especially yes! to all the inner commentary (parenthesis).

Adored homage to Trublood ending.

Enjoyed immensely-thank you for sharing!

paleandicecold chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
A very unexpected gem. As I was reading I kept thinking I don't like the narration of this story; the flow reads like a drone, but I kept reading and reading... It was like one of those moments when your like wait for it...wait for it...wai..., and wow the ending just caused a slow satisfied smile to spread across my face. It was just so out of the blue.

Thanks for sharing.
HRHLadyEsme chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This is friggin BRILLIANT! What a fantastic spin on things, lol :-) Nicely done :-)
SugarVenom chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
That was wonderful!
cullen sandra chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
i loved it, it was dark and funny. ohh edward always the cocky one.
Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Cocky in a fresh tone! Thanks.
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
this was fantastically creapy!
LIZ chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
amazing, amazing work. love the snark. love that this is a one-shot. youre GIFTED.
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