Reviews for Heloise's Big Revelation
MH2 chapter 2 . 3/12
i think this story is dead since it's been 4 years, 4 YEARS!
thewookie1 chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
I wish this story would come out of writing hell. It was very well written and certainly was accomplishing a believable backstory for Heloise
The Chibiest Finnian chapter 2 . 1/12/2014
The first thing I thought when the device exploded was that Jimmy carried the Golden Radiance.
kingofmonsters1 chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
That was awesome beyond awesome I loved it so much I hope she does best Lucius and fixs all that he destructed I can't wait to see what happens next
kingofmonsters1 chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
That was one tweeted and mast up she had to safer so much for nothing I don't fell bad for what happened to Asimov one bit he deserves all of it I only fill bad for Heloise for what happened to her and Jimmy needs to start tilling Beezy to back off some time and give them so space and Lucius needs to get his ass kicked by something for what he did
QuickBlazer992 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Great story, when are you going to make more?
Guest chapter 2 . 12/3/2012
chapter 3 i love this story
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I hope you continue with your story please.
oOmig0shdatdumb44 chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Oh...Sooo, yur just gonna decide that, yur not gonna make any MORE CHAPTERS!... .,DUDE! if you not gonna make anny more chapters...THEN EXPECT TO SEE ABOUT 5 MORE!

Cuz am not about let a frign awsomely boss storry like this end with..."i have to go," she said,jumping to her feet. Before Jimmy could stop her,SHE WAS GONE! NO FRIGN WAY!...

so..i guess what im trin to say is...im sugestin you make more chapters...pleeaaseee!
jarec chapter 2 . 5/6/2012
I hope you plan to continue this. It's well written, well paced and has plenty of possibilities. I'm especially curious about what Beezy was like pre-Jimmy.
Berry's Ambitions chapter 2 . 1/27/2012
I'm normally not a big Jimmy/Heloise shipper *hides from enraged fans* but this story is written beautifully. Good fics in this fandom are so hard to come by. Keep up the wonderful work! I'm enraptured! :D
Jimmy two shoes chapter 2 . 11/8/2011
Haha I love this story please update
Amras Felagund chapter 2 . 10/19/2011
When I was beta'ing this, I thought Samy was a typo, but I Googled this series and realised that that was the proper spelling.

Heloise is a lovely shade of tsundere, methinks. Wondering when the tsuntsun will be overshadowed by the deredere...

AF
Miss Yaya chapter 2 . 10/19/2011
Another great chapter :D I don't know why, but the whole gag about Samy spilling his blood and Lucy saying it would come out of his pay... h d me laughing so hard. perhaps I'm a bad person, but it just fit so well with the character

Keep up the good writing
Miss Yaya chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Oh... I am amazed at this. The first J2S fanfic I read that has me giggling with the suspense! well done, it's well written and just... just so, so addictive
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