|Reviews for The Return of the Marauders|
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 56 . 10/16
Well, when Remus and Fleur were killed I had to take a break from binge reading this fic. You just reunited Sirius, James, and Remus, then broke them up again. And Fleur... she'd been training with the Marauders so why didn't she grab a hunk of rock or something to take the blow instead of diving in front of a curse for Bill? They made sure to recommend that strategy in the training. Or just chuck a Veela Fireball. She never used her more bird like form to give her an edge, seems pretty stupid.
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 55 . 10/16
Now that is an awesome way of taking out Moldyshorts for good. Listing all his little soul fragments and who destroyed them. Very cool.
| InfinityMask chapter 17 . 10/8
Sigh... So no Harry Daphne huh? What a shame...
| InfinityMask chapter 16 . 10/8
I really hope Daphne would join the pairing...
| InfinityMask chapter 14 . 10/8
You my friend reall make an amazing fight/war scene... Really really amazing... I especially like when the marauders mark show up and marauders showing up! Really cool!
| InfinityMask chapter 13 . 10/8
Oohh. The child mother is Sirius old lover and Daphne mother huh? Lol
| InfinityMask chapter 2 . 10/5
It interesting.. It's shame there wouldn't Lily Sirius... I hope this would be Harry/Ginny/Daphne though...
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/14
Well its been okay so far but I think Ill have to drop this. Its too ''Hooorah!' for me. Very Gunghoh.
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/14
Why is this so Americanized :( Harry seems like a Frat bro for gods sake.
| SarahOlivier chapter 18 . 9/14
Where is Luna
| JewBrow94 chapter 6 . 9/14
I like the story and am wondering if you have the memories in present tense on purpose or not ether way it's a good story
| CaptainRumbro chapter 6 . 9/13
I like this story. It's just written way too American.
| CaptainRumbro chapter 3 . 9/13
The word Freekin bothers me. its not a British thing.
Besides that I like the book so far.
| RamblingInsomniac chapter 9 . 8/21
Your story is really good! got my attention right from the first chapter. the only thing is, you tend to mix some of your words I know what you mean, but the word used is sometimes incorrect. Same with the spelling. I don't know if you are a native English speaker or not, but I would suggest getting a beta or maybe using a more rigorous spell check. Good job all the same, and I hope you take this constructive criticism in a positive light.
| mckertis chapter 10 . 8/20
How is it that all of you yanks are too bloody stupid to see the difference between Ginevra and Ginerva ? Oh wait, what am i saying, you are yanks, you are supposed to be dumb as bricks !