Really amazing story!

I love the story so far. But this chapter chaffed me so much I must write a review. Don't take this the wrong way but the fight against Carrow in hospital ward is just plain stupid. There are three trained attackers, two of which are Black sisters, and the target, Rose, has made herself safe by crawling under the bed. And the marauders want to completely destroy the DE and still they had all their identities revealed and turned into animagus forms in close spaces and took unnecessary damage. The spell choice and the actions taken by the marauders does not reflect all the training they have done. This is in direct contrast to the story so far. They train for high adrenaline scenarios but those rookie mistakes? Sorry if I came too strong in my criticism, but I felt I like this story more, that I couldn't not post my thoughts on this chapter.

First chapter in and I'm already cringing my ass off. Pass.

love the interaction between Harry and ginny

Love the story so far. I just started it but I have a pretty good idea who shadow is without going any further. Nice hint by the way. I am posting this after reading chapter 4. I haven’t read five yet but I am extremely interested so far. Keep up the great work

wonderfull fic!

Read it because of the reviews but damn I did not find this work good at all. Writing is eh and the plot is all over the place. Only got to this chapter because I was fast scrolling through the previous ones in hopes of seeing something that would convince me this was worth reading. An amazing work I would say for those who have no idea what good writing is but for the rest of us... nah.

All I can really say is "Thank you!" Yes, there may be spelling errors, but they rarely detract from the enjoyable story. The add-on story on the visit to the Succubus Coven was quite enjoyable as well. 4*/5

But ... she sent her house elf to get Jade to safety in the last chapter. So why is anyone still looking to save her in this chapter?

Oh man, this is just as phenomenal and enrapturing as I remember it 4 years ago.

You’re probably not on here anymore, but I’ll leave this here, in case you ever return and see it.

Recently, I spontaneously decided to wallow in some nostalgia by re-reading some fanfics I’d read a long time ago, and this was immediately the first one that came to mind. The name took a while to come to me, but I found it in the end. The grin that exploded on my face when I did… it was unreal.

This is, without a doubt, one of the most well-written and thought-out Harry Potter fanfics I’ve ever read. I absolutely love the characterization and conflicts, playful humour and sarcasm, and ofc the more intimate scenes are frickin awesome.

Falling in love with characters I’d known so well all those years ago, especially Daphne and Sasha, was sooo fulfilling. I tried to savour the experience, and that I certainly did, but I still finished the entire thing within a week xD

I’ve read and re-read this at least thrice now, so I think I can say it’ll never leave me. I’m so glad you didn’t stop at only a dozen chapters, and continued it until the end. Thank you so, so much, for spending the time to write this, and bringing all this happiness and joy to me and all those that have enjoyed this story v

In case you didn't know, being a dick is not the same as having a backbone. If Harry doesn't want to be sorted then he shouldn't be attending a school that requires him to be sorted. It's kind of bratty that he just shows up and demands an exemption.

I loved your story. I wish you had written more.

I still really like your story, but I wish there was more Harry/Ginny in the story. They seem to barely interact, and for a fic that can show their relationship and not end when they get together, it's a shame to miss that part of them.

How sad, but at the same time, what a beautiful farewell! But it's a pity that this new, good Petunia Dursley didn't have more time to reunite with her sister and nephew, and above all, to share with her daughter.

Bravo! Molly needed that lesson, and you've given it to her in the best possible way. I loved it.