Reviews for The Return of the Marauders
LanaSlvrtongue chapter 1 . 11/24
Really enjoyed this story. I do agree little things could shift this story from a very strong good story to a great story. The POV jumping around is difficult to follow at some points. There were scenes I wasn’t sure who I was peering into the mind of. A Beta would make it a great story.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 56 . 11/19
A great story here! Thanks for posting it!
Patchworkgeeksheet chapter 6 . 11/9
I really want to enjoy this fic, but I am absolutely dying to take a red pen to it and fix all of the spelling and grammar issues, they make it so hard to read! It's very difficult to lose yourself in a story when your head is trying to translate what is really being written. honestly, I'd happily volunteer to sort it out, would keep me quiet for a bit
wordgrammrpolice chapter 2 . 11/2
lesbian. not gay. Daphne is lesbian
VereorNox1247 chapter 28 . 10/31
I don't think a fanfic has ever brought me to tears like that.
cuby18 chapter 1 . 10/28
I really like the beginning. I find it an interesting new turn in the Neville is the BWL stories. I also love how characters are portrayed, especially Ginny, Hermione and Ron I'm looking forward to reading more.
smallwjl chapter 55 . 10/22
Everytime I think of hellcat I think of that yellow fox like digimon
senawario chapter 1 . 10/16
decent story... but oh soooo many homophone errors!
ddentler21 chapter 56 . 10/4
Damn this was a fantastic story. Overall it's certainly one of the best rounded ones out there in terms of quality, length, uniqueness, OCs, and a bunch of badass Animagus shenanigans.
Aileron97 chapter 1 . 9/29
Just reading the first chapter, and Harry feels like an entitled little shit. Gary stue character. So yea, going to drop this, a shame.
stylo1 chapter 1 . 9/22
this is really a bad one, you defy the laws of nature and magic changing by the chapter(and of the english language). last 20 chapters i started skipping half damn my own obsessive mind to finish reading what i started
stylo1 chapter 11 . 9/20
damn this makes my head spin, pov change way to much but not only in pov but in subject aswel meaning in the middle of a fight it switches pov and focussus on something totally unrelated. if that wasnt enough so does the time line, even in a flashback it jumps back and forward. your use of english is often so bad that whole lines are just dont make sence
its really to bad you've got an awesome concept here, i think it would've been way better if you started at the beginning so there wouldnt be any need for flashbacks. aswell as focus your pov's on the same subject
jeannetaylor79 chapter 18 . 9/7
Such a great fic but so many errors. Do fic writers not understand that educated minds seeing a blatantly spelled word just halts the enjoyment of the otherwise awesome story line? You needed to have a Beta who didn't use spell check to beta your fic. This is my second reading of this fic. Didn't mean to flame but to me spelling is so important as it helps the story to unfold smoothly. Point may be moot as you probably don't even get reviews at this point in time. Take care.
worleys91 chapter 56 . 8/24
This story was absolutely amazing. By far one of the best fanfics I have ever read. As much as I would have loved for you to do a sequel, I don't think it needed one. Thank you so much for the time and effort it had to have taken to write this. LOVE
God of thunder117 chapter 56 . 8/8
One of the best story's I have ever had the honor to read
Keep up the great work
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