Reviews for True Emotions Revealed
dax0042 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Not bad. Can't say I'm big on Chance and Callie pairings, but this was good.
ulyferal chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
It's a sweet story but it really needed a beta...far too many spelling and punctuation errors. The switch to POV toward the end was jarring and disrupted the storyline completely. Practice is the cure for most of the ills in your writing style but the idea and the voice is spot on. There are some really great 'how tos of writing' on Defiant Art. You should check them out and keep writing that's the only way to improve.