Reviews for Joining
PaleAngel90 chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Love this story Cute and hot at the same time
ThePeacefulKnight chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Artemis1000 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Very sweet and hot, I enjoyed it!
Phoenix13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
THEY DID IT! They finally did it - managed to frag each other senseless without words, cuddles or misinterpretted meanings getting in the way! YES! :-D

Optimus getting his fingers in. Good mech!

"If you like this, how do you think it will feel when I'm finally inside you?" he asked.

I think you just put nearly a hundred thousand Optimus Prime fangirls into a group faint, steelcrash. ;-)

"Satisfied, Optimus willed his own plating to part, revealing his spike."

...and that just killed them stone dead! XD Who cares about the Holy Grail, getting to heaven, or anything else that humans are supposed to lust after, us femmes just want to see what Optimus has behind his formidable armor! Thrust Optimus, thrust! :-D

Glad to see you dispel some of the escalating sexual tension from 'Precip'. :-)
AutobotV chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Wow! You don't see many Optimus x Hot Rod fics nowadays

Nice work!
VeekaIzhanez chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
whoa! so nice!