Reviews for A Wish Fulfilled
Cyber Girl chapter 4 . 9/11/2012
Loved the last chapter. Hope you continue the story. You might as well since it is already not a one-shot anymore. Please write soon.
Cyber Girl chapter 3 . 9/11/2012
Good battle scene, well described.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
Okay that was a bit awkward. Massaya is always in the way
Cyber Girl chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Great beginning and I'm glad it was not a one-shot. Loved the kissing scene.
MewVanilla567 chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
If a character tells another one to be careful, they almost ALWAYS get hurt or killed :) Great work!
Eucalyptus Mint chapter 4 . 6/3/2011
Wasnt the line "it was breif and very, very sweet" from Twilight:Eclipse when Jacob kisses her for like the 3rd time? I think it is Lol i knew it had sounded familiar :D
3Nezumi-chan3 chapter 4 . 1/3/2011
oh boy i did like this story! it was sweet! are you going to make a sequel? because nobody ever told Ichigo that masaya called.
MeteorLeopard chapter 4 . 11/2/2010
This story was amazing! The characters behaviour was written so well that I could actually picture them acting like this in the real manga or anime!

Your language and spelling was also good and I truly enjoyed reading your story right through. It's up-side was that is was short and sweet and got right to the point whereas sometimes the story can get drawn out while the writer gets to the actual point of the story and by that time one could have lost interest. However, you started it off right in the middle of the action and made me immediately curious to read on.

Like I said before, this story is amazing and I really love it. I can't believe it didn't get more reviews! At any rate; excellent work.
mewmewgirl363 chapter 3 . 10/15/2010
love it love it LOVE IT
mewmewgirl363 chapter 2 . 10/15/2010
i like it no i dont i love it
misscutestuff chapter 4 . 4/1/2010
Wow! I loved it.

I liked the other Mews reactions it made me laugh.
Lass Cherrie chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
AANG~!

Oh, my LORD! How... how did you not tell me about this story? I didn't beta it, did I? *searches memory frantically* No... No, I'm most certain I didn't! :O

This is amazing! I adored it! I LOVED how you described their kiss - it was so passionate, so... FEELING! It was very fast-paced and very quickly introduced, but hopefully that will nut itself out in the later chapters. :)

Also. Did you post the entire story in one go? Wakarimasen. How does it not have any reviews? Hasn't anyone seriously ever reviewed it in all the four chapters of you having posted? That's phenomenal. I can't comprehend it. This story is too... well-written, too encapturing and enthralling to go unnoticed.

Lovely description, excellent characterisation, good grammar/spelling. I find nothing to critiscise in this except for how quickly it happened. Perhaps a tad bit rushed, but, since I'm the biggest R/I fan out there - THE sucker for fluff, no matter the speed XD - that didn't bother me XD

I can't wait to read the next few chapters! I'll review as I go. This story deserves reviews :3

Wonderful job! :D

Lots of love,

Cherrie xx