Reviews for GuyFace
animeluver420 chapter 11 . 4/5/2013
(This is for chapter 11)
GAARA! If anyone else, it would be Hinata or Temari :D
xartsygeekx chapter 13 . 11/25/2012
HA! Your know the weird thing about that annoying girl you made up? I know a person just like that, eceapt she's a "Ahem" very heavy in the waist and wears the tinest clothing imaginable. :I I wish something evil would happen to her.
SnorlaxLazy chapter 18 . 8/11/2012
Oho! So I was completely shocked to see this version of Hinata, but what was cool was that her external self she showed to the other characters was still herself! It's just her thoughts were insane and hilarious. Heh. This was quite an enjoyable story.

Usually, when there are characters like Minnie in there it's usually a canon character like Karin or Ami so I've never liked reading stories with those in them, however Minnie was kind of refreshing? Lol. An annoying nice bitch who can't take a hint yet tries to remain friends with everyone is totally different than a bitch character that gets outcasted and gets their revenge. Very nice, very nice.

Thanks for the great story! I love your writing style since it never failed to make me at least smile. The only thing that bothered me was Deidara's constant 'hmm/yeah'. He IS able to speak without those at every end of the sentence :) argh, long review.
Fanwoman chapter 6 . 9/6/2011
You really had fun creating Minnie, didn't you?

I had forgotten how catty your Hinata is.

Yay for all the Temari love. :D

Such an ending!
Fanwoman chapter 5 . 8/10/2011
Ramen and lynx?

That's so funny that she asks the lady at the bus stop.
Fanwoman chapter 4 . 8/5/2011
Bad, Shino!

Ah, it's an excuse for the guy parade. LOL

You make me feel sorry for Sasuke, leaving him alone with her. LOL
Fanwoman chapter 3 . 8/5/2011
Whoa, I didn't realize this was 18 chapters! Guess I won't get to finish today. Something to look forward to.

Wait, Hinata doesn't think Neji is hot? I know they're cousins, but she can't be blind.

At least Shino has her back.
Fanwoman chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
Yay for Shino! In any universe, her dad needs to get over himself; no being dismissive of Shino!

Nosy Shino!

How is it you make Neji so stuck up yet funny at the same time? It's hysterical how Hinata both appreciates and dislikes how scary and rude Neji can be.

Interesting. Then again, Naruto is, theoretically, Sasuke's best friend, so I can imagine he'd want to get rid of dogface.
Fanwoman chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I've run out of Narutoverse KibaHina, so I figured I should try some AU. This was on a Favorites list of someone who faved one of mine, so I thought I'd give it a try. :D

Pfft! I feel sorry for her right off the bat, but that *was* kinda funny. The buying a coke getting married is pretty funny, too.

Your Hinata is amusingly catty.

Ah! You know about Kibalicious!

Interesting setup. Looks like fun.
Chocolate Pencil chapter 18 . 7/7/2011
Yes, it is very overdue for a review from me. Where do I start?

I love the characters' personalities, especially Hinata's. It shows that she's shy, but inside she has inner thoughts and hates like any other girl. You made me hate Min, which is good, trust me. AND YOU HAVE THE AKATSUKI TOO! Bonus points.

The humor was ROTFLOL worthy, especially during Temari and Min's fight, and it was sweet how Kiba and Hinata ended up together.

Great job!
98544970 chapter 18 . 2/4/2011
Cheesy? Maybe. Awesome? Definetely! I'm surprised I didn't really mind KibaHina at the end. Your fic was just totally awesome. You rock! AND TEMARI PUSHED MINNIE IN A BUSH! WOOOT! Temari is the best! Your fic was the best! It's people like you on fanfiction that really kill us with your amazing stories! Btw, maybe next fic AnkoXOreo? Dunno. Just a suggestion. Best Wishes Asuka99 ;)
Suraya Bakboord chapter 18 . 1/31/2011


Inuyonas chapter 18 . 1/30/2011
AWWW! Thanx for thanking me in the chapter. This story as written expertly and t was awesome from beginning to end. I feel ppriviledged to have read such a great story from such a great author. THANK YOU

PS: Minnie got pushed into a bush lol

PSS: What kind of bush was it?

PSSS: I hope it was a sticky bush lol
warmaidens chapter 18 . 1/30/2011
Omg, it's over. D; Oh well, at least you're making another fic. 8D

This chapter made me laugh, like a lot, especially at the beginning. I like the 'maintain packing efficiency' line and think I'll use it while packing since I'm moving soon. xD But in between the cheesiness and everything else I dunno what made me laugh more.

Well, great job anyway. You've kept me interested through the whole thing. Kudos to you. :3

I'd write more, but I'm using my Wii to do this and don't have a keyboard atm. I loved the fic though and I'll keep my eye out for the next one. :o

Great job once more. Keep up the good work. :D

-Ai Deidara
PruCan4evar chapter 18 . 1/30/2011
I'm VERY sure we'll see each other around ! It's a small world, even smaller for us KibaHina fans! ;D

I'm happy to know my wisdom of the fandom has kept you laughing and smiling! It's good to know people enjoy my rambunctious humor! :D I'm also glad to know that you're now a KibaHina supporter! Makes me proud!

I love how you ended the chapter, just like a movie! But what really sold me was the part when Temari pushed Minnie into the bush. I couldn't, for the life of me, take a damn breath! Such a simple sentence is so funny...

Anyway, I'm sad to say that this is my last review for the story, considering it's the end. But I regret nothing of whatever it is I have posted as a review, because it has helped you along and has help keep your sanity in check! ;) Goodbye! Hope to see you around FF!
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