|Reviews for Watching the Sky Turn|
| Kdub4127 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Dam that is sad cryed all threw this story. Love your writing and the way you tell tragedy that my heart beat so fast and the tears fell from my eys. Cant wait to read more of your writing
| Alterite chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Wow, this was beautiful and breathtaking. I'm just crying right now, but I'm not even sad. That's very confusing! Thanks for this amazing story, it goes directly to my favourites.
Love from France,
| ShoeGalK chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Beautiful and touching.
Tears filled my eyes whilst reading it.
| odinamus chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
So so good. Thank you for writing such a beautiful and meaningful story.
| harleys chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Wow! Great oneshot!
| star574 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
So beautifully written. :) Not really a surprise that it did well in the contest.
| IcarusToSun chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Wow! How sad and beautiful. I rarely read oneshots. Glad I made an exception.
| MJLYP chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Holy crap! That's the saddest thing I've ever read!
| As Clumsy As Me chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
This was beautiful and sad. I love the fact that it's from Carlisle's point of view.
| fangrl01 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
So sad. I shed big fat tears reading this story.
| sleepwalker1 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
This was a beautifully written and moving piece. I really love the way you write.
| ConstantRambling chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
*sobs* Best one shot ever. And probably the most heart wrenching.
| froggyqueen chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
wow! Loved how Carlisle was telling the story but it still dealt in flashes of the past. Very unique. The story itself, sad..heart wrenching..beautiful.
| DiallMe chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
You wouldn't believe how hard I cried.
You got everything on point; it was perfect. I don't think anything
could make it better for it was already at it's best. The writing was perfect, too. I loved the way you did the flashbacks.
You really showed how much Edward loved Bella, and how deep it was.
How much he cares for her, that he was willing to take his life to
be with her. Love, I guess. It makes you do stupid things. :')
| SaphiraGoddess chapter 1 . 1/1/2011