Reviews for Role Reversal |
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![]() ![]() You're a talented writer and this story was interesting but also painful, I really hate the Cullens. |
![]() ![]() I have to be honest and say, I actually only skim over Edwards POV, I would do the same for all the Cullens. Yeah, I am not fond of them. Jacob, Bella and the pack, I would read every word of their POV. I love protectors not predators. Your story is very well written. |
![]() ![]() I loved hearing from Jake,not so much Mr sparkles I was never a Cullen fan, they are deceitful undead predators, |
![]() ![]() i love jacib povs. especially ones where he is carefree and just enjoying a crush on Bella... hes just SOO CUTE! love this story, keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() I can’t even tell that English isn’t your first language! This is way better than anything I could have written and I was born and raised in the USA! You are simply amazing. Never give up writing. I can’t to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it! Dont let the language barrier stress you out, I thought it was really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jasper. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you mean mental hospital, not brain hospital. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha that's really good you need to finish this awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() really, bella is quite nosy about the cullen's considering she likes jacob instead of edward in your story! i'd almost feel bad for her bothering them about it, except for the fact that it's pretty obvious they could've just left her alone and everything would've been fine, so it's really all their fault. interesting to see rachel, has me wondering if she'll be running into paul or not...and wow if english is your second language i guess it seems like my third if we're comparing writing skills! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quil and Sam are very bold to be talking about the wolves and vampire's secrets like that. Very sweet kiss and nice conversation leading up to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute pajama party. Interesting concept - fun with girlfriends. Another thing that was lacking in the books. |
![]() ![]() Love that Bella thinks of Edward as a father figure - telling her what to do. Awesome. He is 80 years older than her! She never figured that out. |
![]() ![]() Interesting take on it. Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What dent? There's no dent. Good chap. |