|Reviews for Defeat|
| gr8rockstarrox chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Short and sweet! I liked it! xD
| major bro army chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
wtf this may be short but suprisingly i liked it keep up the good work
| WickedLovely95 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
This is so sweet. I love the style and the flow. It's short, but not too short. I also loved Holly and Butler at the end. Very cute.
| Lord Jace chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Simply Lovely. I must thank you for this bit of Arty/Juliet romance. While I do typically prefer the Artemis/Holly branch of the fandom, there are times when I can't help but imagine if things went down this road instead. And really, there should be more of these. So thank you for brightening my day with this glimmer.
| Heinah chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I was also thought of doing this kind of oneshot. It's so wonderful... So romantic.. Love it! :)
| Kitsune Heart chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Hm...I'm honestly a bit confused. I know you want this swift, but it feels far too short. Mostly in that I didn't really get how Juliet "lost." I initially thought she failed to make it as a wrestler, and sort of wanted to hit you. Like...oh, she can't make it doing the thing she wants to do with her life, might as well go get a love interest!
So...very good description at the end, and a nice flow, but a little confusing.
| abcdefg8EN chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Aw... well isn't that just wonderful?
Writing was good. Story was touching and sweet. Short, but not irritatingly so. Good spelling and grammar. Good story :)