Reviews for Glory
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Absolutely lovely.
Any improvement might be page breaks or some other indication of where it switches location. Otherwise excellent.
Fragalaga chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Buddy, you need more followers. This stuff is amaze
David Allerton chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Very cool, I like the whole concept a lot and your execution was spot-on. I'm afraid I really don't have any criticism, so I cannot help you become a better writer :) anyway great job
ARCtheElite chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Wow. A very intense story. I feel as if there should be some moral or something to this story, but I can't place my finger on it. Still, I really like the idea of everything being in her head. It kind of sounds like Goethe's Erlking. Great job!