|Reviews for Yasogami Busters!|
| fraughtwithsparkles chapter 13 . 4/9/2011
Wow, I'm really starting to enjoy reading this story! I absolutely adored the game myself, and I really like the way tis isn't just a novelization- it's an actual story, different from the game. I like how you've made it so the main character has a shadow, since I've always found it unfair that she/he didn't have to fight one. However, it might be that *spoilers for the true ending here* Izanami touching him and giving him the power to use Persona changes that, like with Nametame.
Also, in the bit where it says;
"Whoa! She has a better nose than I do?" Teddie blinked, his eyes widened. "What's your name?"
"Miss..?" She groaned, pinching the bridge of her nose before continuing, "It's Chie. Never mind that, though. Tell me about that someone!"
I know what your implying, but you've missed out the "miss" on the end of Teddie's speech _.
Hoping for an update soon!
| FunTerry chapter 15 . 2/2/2011
This story is interesting and the plot has potential. I'll stay tuned for it. I wonder if Kana have any powers and if so what are they? When are we going to know what happen to the MC past?
Thanks for the story, keep writing!
| mewmewlover23 chapter 15 . 1/31/2011
Write the next chapter soon!
| minaseiko1 chapter 13 . 10/17/2010
LOve your story! please update soon. D
| Astrih Konnash chapter 13 . 10/13/2010
Don't worry.. school comes first so take your time
Interesting fic - been following it for a time (now subscribing it)
| Moonshine's Guide chapter 12 . 8/5/2010
This is actually kind of interesting. I haven't read a lot of persona fanfiction, but this one seems pretty good. There's just a few errors; some minor grammar stuff, and the fact that you sometimes put him instead of her during dialogue referring to Remi. Like when you use dialogue from a game script or something. That doesn't happen often though.
Other than that, good job so far. Especially considering the lack of reviews for this story. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep writing~
| AkIrA121 chapter 12 . 8/5/2010
I just started reading this but this is awesome!
| Blackecplise chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
Wow~! Syphira-san, I never thought of putting a female protagonist too on P4~! I like it! expecially with King Moron, "My places and Life Journals"...at the game i seriously laughed! Hey~ Include me there too~! yay~~! A awesome chapter! Include me~! me~! Me~~!