Reviews for Kids' Stories |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! is there anyway I could talk you into writing more for SPN/Alice? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This. Was. Fantastic. Seriously, every character felt so *in* character. Dean and Sam's dialogue especially. I could *hear* their voices. And the crossover worked amazingly well. I saw the concept and was rather skeptical, but this... this just worked. Wow. Just, wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will there be more? 3 both 'verses. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story so far! Please keep it going, I am eager to see what happens! I like your idea for it as well, I never would have thought Supernatural and Alice would mix well, but I think you do it justice. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. You had the characterization down to the last dot and you wrapped up the plot line so that it was believable, but without it being too convenient. Amazing job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just getting into Supernatural, but I LOVE Alice. This story is great. If this is your first Supernatural fic, then you should definitely write more. _b |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oo. I love this. Can't wait for more. Dean is so funny and it interesting to see what happened when hatter found alice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good idea. I like it that Sam and Dean didn't find out that that was the true Looking Glass. I think it'd be interesting if Sam and Dean ran into Alice and Hatter again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trying to keep his skepticism to a minimum, Dean merely snorted under his breath when Sam pulled out the homemade EMF meter from his coat pocket. "Got anything there?" he asked. "I can sing some Jefferson Airplane if it'll help the mood." - *Snicker* The cops left right after, David following as closely behind as he could. Regardless of all he said, he'd be damned if they just up and took his Alice away from him. - Oh so true. I liked it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really fun! I really liked the CO that I thought wouldn't work but still wanted to read... worth it! It struck me that Hatter and Dean really are the same type of guy both suave and eccentric with great hair and strong features... only differance is Dean is American and Hatters Wonderlandian... well that and their fashion sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First, I've gotta say, I about flipped when you were writing a Supernatural story. It's my favorite TV Show and you're my favorite fanfiction writer, so needless too say, I was hyped(: Once again, you have managed to write a well written story that I love (: Though, you do have some minor grammar issues, by the way. Just a missing word in some places and a few misspelled words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude! You wrote Dean and Sam really well the Jefferson Airplane refrence was a nice touch. You gonna make 'em go through? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have to say, been looking forward to this story since I read about the prompt on new_wonderland. And being a fan of both series...it was awesome. Too bad its just the one chapter. Just think about how much it would freak them out to know that Wonderland really is real. Just the thought brings a smile to my face. Though part of me would have loved to have seen a fight between the boys and Hatter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I knida just have to say I love you for this. ) Lol, these are probably my two favorite shows ever and you put them togther, quite well actually. Makes me wonder what'll happen in chapter 2! |