Reviews for D E L U S I O N A L
TheYesBarrage chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
im totally creeping your stories dont mind me haha

um this was beautiful. i teared OFCOURSE I DID poor shannon but this omg this was great good job
TheLyraAnn chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
this is sad but its good :)
takers dark lover chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
This was very sad poor Shannon.
Punkersssfan1 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Yay! I'll Have Nightmares For A Week!

Sam This Was Awesome!

Poor Shann! D:

JOHN? D: JOHN? OMG!

I Didn't See That Coming! XD

Ew So Much Blood!

But That Makes It So Much Awesome-er :D

Me Likey This Writing Style!

Me Hopes To See More Lke This!3
NeroAnne chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
I so knew you were gonna do it, XD!

Story:

Blood and sweat? XD! You're bleeding the poor kid ALREADY? XD!

0_0 Is that MATT talking to Shan? Oh, what an ass..

Ooh...nice. XD! Abuse! You rock at it, like ALWAYZ.

0_0 Ooh, that's creepy.

OMG! It IS Matt! He's like..WARPING Poor Shanny boy's MIND. HOW EVIL. XD.

...Wait...I'm confused.

*Reads on*

SHANNON IS DOING IT TO HIMSELF?

OMG...no whey. Shan needs help if he really is seeing things and thinking things. He needs hugs, too.

XP! Come, come, Jeff is lovely redefined, but Shan is a cutie!

...No Hardycest? XD! Ah, well, XD! Shan and Matt are adorable together.

That..sucks. Poor Shannon. How will he ever know what's really going on?

Matt didn't DO anything...right? Knowing you, my little love, something is up. XD!

*reads on*

LMAO. "Stupid Matt Hardy" XD! Shan is so warped.

XD! Hardy kiss! XD!

Oh come on, Shan, snap out of it. :( He makes me sad. He needs to get raped out of his thoughts..XD!

Yeah, they wouldn't tell their best friend that he's whacked cruelly. XD.

Shannon is a butterfly! OH SO TRUE!

XP! LMAO. You're making some comedy in angst! XD! It's so amazing. I love it.

*reads on*

NO NO NO! Shannon can't die until he's been raped!

He really does need help...the poor boy. How the hell did this even start?

BUBBLE! XD!

Uh oh...more things to pile on. Hm...this doesn't seem as if it's fake, though. It almost sounds like it's actually happening to him. Damn,this is awesome, XD!

*reads on*

OH! SEE! There IS something in the past. Oh, man. It really muffed up SHanny...

0_0...was it Jeff? I dunno, he seems TOO innocent in all this...it' scaring me! XDD!

QUE? XD! OMG! JOMO! XD!

Holy muff, that's the LAST thing I expected! XD!

Alright! XD! So he WAS raped! By MORRISON. Dude, that's so good! XD! I love it!

Poor Shanny..he's so whacked now!

*reads on*

0_0 you made Morrison kill a baby! XD! I. LOVE. YOU. XDD! Man, what angst! SO perfectly WRITTEN!

It's all so sad...but so damn good...how do you do it? XD!

0_0 OMG..it's all coming down to...

BEAUITFUL. EPIC. WINNAGE. OMG. SO DAMN GOOD!

XP! Mah baby ish 15, X3! XD!

LOVED IT!

LOVE YOU. 3 3 3 3
Shaddin chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
I LIKE IT TOO! LOVE it, actually :D Awesome work, as usual :)